I found a bug / typo at the start when you chose your name.
It says the same thing phrased differently twice
It says the same thing phrased differently twice
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An argument that was settled and banned by mods last August.
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Yeah, please don’t dig up old debates, and especially don’t start insulting people about them. Thanks!
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Hey, thank you for the heads up! 
I’ll fix it asap.
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Glad I could help!
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I’m honestly unsure how that managed to slip my notice, but thank you for the help (again)! 
I just uploaded a new version, so now it should be fixed.
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Found a rather big one, Iris’s mom talk to you as if you ran away with Iris even if you haven’t seen Iris yet or at all at the party.
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Thank you, it should be fixed now!
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It’s weird to me that Iris and my MC act like they don’t know each other at the party even though they became friends and she kissed him at the festival earlier in the story
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Hey, the whole parade section was actually rewritten back in February (it was much shorter) so the puppet show scene where you can first meet Iris is younger than Chapter 2. Because of that, (after I finally release the revision I’m currently working on) the first Chapter 2 scene with her will play out differently for those who met Iris before.
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Ah ok that makes total sense then. And good luck with the rewrite!
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Thank you, I’ll add a warning to that scene in a minute - just to avoid any confusion.
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I require revenge! I love it so far. 
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Just played through the demo and I enjoyed it very much! You managed to make the world feel well-developed already, plus the characters are fairly fleshed out which I definitely liked. Throughout the first chapter, I was like “please don’t kill my family” and well… I got what I wanted, but at what cost? 
You wrote one of the best and fleshed out families I’ve seen in a WIP in a hot minute, I felt so bad for our mom at the end of Chapter 2. Plus Julia is an absolute menace lol. For the ROs, I’m already enjoying the PC’s dynamic with Iris, specifically for the bold/shameless flirt PC. My PC’s really gonna miss Iris and her endless yap sessions lol.
My one gripe is probably the coding issues with pronouns and stuff, the characters kept referring to my PC as a guy and using he/him pronouns in some scenes even though my PC is a girl. But I get it, coding is confusing lol.
Anyway, can’t wait for more!
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