(WIP) Broken Fable [220k Public, Updated 5/7/24]

What? Dude the MC is literally standing next to 2 people who don’t know they are a god and the MC wants to keep it that way then we also have the jerkish son and the dawn patriot or whatever who would also find out and my dude if the iron patriot is just as strong as us they might start thinking WHY THE FUCK THERE IS A STORM THAT IS TALKING MY DUDE CONTROLLING STORMS AND BEING ABLE TO TALK THROUGH THEM IS NOT CONTROLLING ELECTRICITY AND IS LITERALLY THE THING ZEUS IS THOUGHT TO DO

Welp sorry about that got a bit mad so no hard feelings?

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no problem dude it was just a friendly argument… decided to delete my post so they can take down the flag i removed my comment from the page i let them get away with it this once but i don’t appreciate being bullied just because there a admin they can do whatever they want to ordinary members so yes i took it down hope your happy now but if i was a admin i wouldn’t be so petty of flagging someone just for voicing there opinion. out this is america that’s what people do its not illegal to speak out or get in arguments over each others opinions

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Summary


If Pele is around since when the Orohena volcano was active, shouldn’t they be far FAR more older than 1.300? I mean from what I know the last time this volcano erupted was a absurd amount of time ago.

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Hello everybody, just poping in to drop somewhat of a progress report!

I’ve been making good progress with the next part of Chapter 1, and it should be up around the 14th. I’ll try to keep on schedule, but this update is looking like it might double the game’s length, so it’s a lot at moments. The general outline of the update is in the below spoiler.

  • Settle into your new base of operations, which contains opportunities to converse with both Yoru and Kaizo
  • Group dinner and a briefing on the situation of the world, which has rapidly spiraled out of control since the murder of The Shaded Lady
  • Begin training Yoru, model her combat style after one of three famous warriors you looked up too.
  • Go into the City of Edmonton with Kaizo and Yoru, deepen your bonds with one and maybe reveal a little about yourself to them… or don’t and see how that goes.
  • A brief introduction to The Sapphire and Astral Praetors and one of the Major Elders, who is simply known as Red

And finally, I have decided to add another fable. I have a couple of half-written ideas that I had floating around before I decided on the original six, which I could flush out without too much work. I’m in love with a couple of them in particular, so I have attached a poll to decide. This will definitely be the final fable I implement in the game, so I want it to be something people are interested in. This fable will not be included in this upcoming update, they will most likely be included in the one after.

  • Shiva, The Destoyer
  • Lucifer/Satan (This one will be the most unique and Male genderlocked)
  • Tsukuyomi, God/Godess of Dusk (Special Combat options with Yoru)
  • Sett, Usurper of the Deserts

0 voters

For Clarification:

  • Shiva’s ability will all be about indiscriminate destruction, as he performes certian actions the area around him degrades

  • Satan’s ability will be all about pain. A sort of Torture power if you will. Of course there will also be fire and brimstone (might make them gender selectable but it would require rewriting some ofwhat I already have, so i’ll see how much rewriting is required)

  • Sett’s ability will be Sand illusions and contructs. Will be able to make an army out of sand people and will be able to make a “big sand mech”

  • Tsukuyomi will be all about Vision and messing with light. (Will be able to make shadows for Yoru)

Thank you all and I hope everyone has a great week! :smile:

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Oh, that’s a tough choice, all of them could be fun so it’s really hard to choice without knowing much.

Shiva would be neat since Indian Deities are rare in those kind of games, even if Sun Wukong kinda has stuff happening in India too IIRC. Main issue would be that his most likely ‘main stat’ would be power, which Zeus already focus on.

Lucifer / Satan would also be neat since we don’t have a general ‘Christianity / General Europe’ rep yet, Arthur being close but being more of a ‘specific to England / Celtic’ than anything else with how he’s depicted.

Tsukuyomi could be interesting, especially if you mess with the whole ‘Land of a thousand god’ aspect of Japanese folklore and would be a Japanese rep (Sun Wukong is more China-focused here).

Sett would be cool since Egyptian gods are rare too (and when they appear it’s mostly just Ra), the fact he’s a bit of a jobber (even if fearsome) in his own myths would be fun to play with. Only issue would be that his most likely power would be shapeshifting (Giving his biggest fight in his own myth basically being a shapeshifting contest) and that’s already taken by Sun Wukong.

It’s interesting how two of the choices here are mostly famous for their defeats.

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I guess Satan won and somehow it didn’t surprise me

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I think Lucifer will win because it’s one that is most widely known, but I really like the idea of having a character that synergizes with any other main character like Tsukuyomi and Yoru

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This fable appeals to me for several reasons. At least I still have Ishtar to savor. :slight_smile:

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It looks like mah boi Set isn’t gonna be winning anything any time soon. Sure some myths make him look like Elmer Fudd in a Buggs Bunny cartoon but that’s just 'cause he was the god of foreigners and untamed desert in a culture that had long bouts of xenophobia and valued its civilization. It’s fake news I tell you!

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Well, it’s not like I’m complaining. Lucifer has interesting set of powers and I’m pretty excited about this route.

Janus is my favourite so far, but Luc might be competition xd

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Kinda upset lucifer will be gender locked (a demon should be able to change gender :sob:) but oh well Janus is cool

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I mean he literally has ‘will be the most unique’ in his description, it was sure to skew the votes in his favor.

Same for Tsukuyomi being noted to have special options with Yoru.

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Powers & Abilities
As an archangel, Lucifer is one of the most powerful beings to exist, the only beings said to be more powerful than him are God, Death and Michael, though he showed no fear when facing the latter. The immensity of his power was further shown by how an improper human vessel, Nick, decayed greatly as a result of containing him p.s this piece of information of these characters are from the Tv show Lucifer now onto Lucifer’s powers.

  • Nigh-Omnipotence - Being the second oldest archangel, Lucifer is incredibly powerful. As only God and Death can defeat him with certainty, Lucifer has incalculable supernatural power. He can even slay ancient pagan deities with ease, despite using an imperfect and decaying vessel. With Sam as his vessel, he can use the full extent of his powers. Unlike most characters, the extent of his powers is not limited by his presence, as such giving them a near infinite range. His power is so vast and so feared that Castiel, even while empowered by millions of souls, showed an open concern with ensuring Lucifer remain sealed within the Cage, suggesting that despite his extremely enhanced state, Lucifer, either by himself or together with Michael, would be able to defeat Castiel.

  • Immortality - As an angel, Lucifer has an infinitely long lifespan. Time does not degrade his vessel, like with all celestial beings. He is among the first angels and is therefore older than the Earth itself, making him well over 4.5 billion years old. The excessive passing of time does not degrade his vessel, like with all celestial beings. His vessel is unaffected by diseases and toxins. He does not tire, and does not require food, water, oxygen, or sleep to sustain his vessel. On one occasion, Castiel clearly says about killing Lucifer, “It’s foolish, it can’t be done”, and later calls the task “insane”. However, an archangelic blade can kill him, as can God or Death.

  • Angelic Possession - Like all angels Lucifer is required to use a vessel on Earth, as Zachariah emphasizes. And he needs the vessel’s permission, as with all angels. Because of the immensity of his power, he must use a vessel descended from Cain or Abel, or it will begin to decay.

  • Invulnerability - Lucifer’s vessel is impervious to damage and injury, except when harmed by an archangel blade, God or Death, supernatural weapons of significant power, or his archangel brethren. Kali, the most powerful of the deities at the gathering of the pagan deities, tried to harm him with a pyrokinetic attack, but it had no effect and Lucifer simply smiled at her attempt at harming him, showing him to be unaffected by extreme temperatures. The Colt caused him initial pain, but he soon recovered, though it should be noted that his temporary vessel was decaying at the time.

  • Immunity - Lucifer is one of only five things in creation that the Colt cannot kill.

  • Cosmic Awareness - Lucifer has immense awareness of everything, as Sam has said, “I’m sure he knows a buttload we don’t”. He knows spells capable of binding the Horsemen to him, but he, according to Chuck, didn’t know about the Impala.

  • Superhuman Strength - As an archangel, Lucifer endows his vessel with immense superhuman strength, sufficient enough to having slaughtered ancient pagan deities with his bare hands with minor effort. As Gabriel predicted, Lucifer “turned them into finger paint.” Lucifer went on a rampage during which he brutally ripped the other gods to shreds, beating them to death and tearing off their limbs through sheer force. He was able to knock out Kali with one punch, sending her into the air and across the room. This makes him among the strongest beings in all of existence. As the second oldest archangel, he’s significantly stronger than any other angel as well as all demons, spirits, humans, and earthly monsters, including the alphas. He was also able to casually overpower his younger brother Gabriel, an archangel like him. Humans are powerless against him in terms of physical might; he once effortlessly threw Dean into the Impala with great force and literally beat him to a bloody pulp, nearly killing him. Only Michael is his certain equal and possible superior in strength.

  • Super Stamina - His vessel is unaffected by diseases and toxins. He does not tire, and does not require food, water, oxygen, or sleep to sustain his vessel.

  • Regeneration - If Lucifer’s vessel receives any physical damage, the wound will completely heal instantaneously. When shot with the Colt, for example, the bullet hole healed in under a minute. Interestingly, the ability does not reverse the decay caused to Nick by Lucifer’s power. Lucifer is unaffected by natural diseases and illnesses.

  • Shapeshifting - Lucifer can change his form regardless of being inside a vessel or otherwise. Lucifer can change his shape into any person he wanted, similar to Gabriel’s ability; Lucifer once took the form of a Reaper to lure Castiel away.

  • Teleportation - Lucifer can travel anywhere instantly without occupying the space in between. However, when imprisioned in his cage, he cannot leave unless it is opened by an outside force.

  • Power Negation - Lucifer could prevent lesser supernatural creatures from using their powers, as Baldur and Kali where unable to teleport either themselves or the Winchesters when he arrived at the motel where they were hiding.

  • Telepathy - Lucifer had complete access to Sam’s memories, thoughts, and emotions while he possessed him. Lucifer describes Sam’s mind as a “grapefruit.”

  • Advanced Telekinesis - Lucifer can impart kinetic energy on matter with his mind. He is extremely proficient, being able to rip pagan deities apart with this power.

  • Dream Walking - Lucifer has the ability to enter a person’s dreams. Even without a human vessel, Lucifer was able to speak with Nick in his dreams while taking on the appearance of his deceased wife. He demonstrated this again when he spoke to Sam in his dreams while taking on the appearance of Jessica Moore.

  • Cryokinesis - Lucifer can manipulate and generate cold. He froze a pane of glass by merely breathing on it.

  • Supernatural Perception - Lucifer can perceive the true form of beings invisible to the human eye. Lucifer was able to see the true form of Death when he raised the Horseman out of his prison.

  • Weather Manipulation - When Lucifer was released, he altered the weather by creating severe winds and causing hurricanes and tornadoes across the world. He made the entire city of Detroit’s temperature drop simply through his presence.

  • Biokinesis - Lucifer killed Castiel by speeding up his molecules to the point where it caused him to explode simply by snapping his fingers.

  • Reality Warping - Although never displayed in person, Lucifer reminded Gabriel that he taught him everything he knew about using this power, when the latter tried to use it to kill him. Upon his escape the Koreans made their first successful nuclear test.

  • Spell Casting - Lucifer was able to bind the Horsemen to his presence with a spell, controlling their actions to a moderate degree. He also performed a ritual sacrifice of demons to release Death from his coffin. He also knew how to ward angels from the Angel Tablet.

  • Resurrection - Lucifer can easily revive dead people. He is also said to be able to bring back deceased angels. In The Devil You Know, Crowley noted Lucifer can also resurrect dead demons.

  • Terrakinesis - Lucifer could generate earthquakes through his mere presence on the earth; he was able to cause them at a colossal range, creating several across the whole world while he was in America.

  • Precognition - Lucifer could see and accurately predict the future, but he could not see the whole picture; he knew he would possess Sam in Detroit and told him the first time he met him.

  • Torturing - Lucifer is skilled in torture, both physical and spiritual. He tortured Lilith’s spirit to the point where he turned her into the original demon. He also tortured Sam to the point where the mental damage would have killed him, had Castiel not absorbed the damage.

  • White Light - He once captured Castiel by disabling him with a burst of white light.

  • Psychic Projection - Despite being trapped in the cage, he could still communicate to beings on Earth, as he did with Azazel, though Azazel had to sacrifice several nuns for this to be achieved.

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whoa that was a cool explantation of Zeus’s powers 10 outta 10.

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Just a quick tip for writing dialogue, when a different speaker is talking, you should make it a new paragraph. Something like:

Person 1 says, “You’re stupid!”

“Yeah? Well you’re stupider!” replied Person 2.

This makes it easier for the reader to tell when a different person is speaking. Otherwise, I like your story! I played as Sun Wukong for my first playthrough and I really enjoyed it. I like the blend of mythology and superhero genres.

EDIT: Nvm after reading through the demo more I realized this typo only happens in the prologue for the Sun route, will find screenshots after playing.

EDIT 2: Here are the typos I found in the prologue for the Sun Wukong route.

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We talking classic winged angel aesthetic or something different?

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Since it’s Satan also, maybe a dragon form as well.

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This future update possibly adding Satan himself interested me a lot and made me realize a detail that would be a little pointless but interesting:
It would be very interesting if Yurui Yamamoto’s behavior changes depending on the “Fable” that the MC is, for example, She might be a lot more wary of calling in the debt to a character who is Lucifer because of the stereotypes she’s obviously heard, while an MC who is an Arthur she is much calmer, after all, he is still a human in her view

Of course, it’s a simple detail, but for me it would be very interesting to see these differences in treatment that the MC can receive ^^

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O.O whoa that is interesting i approve of your idea 10 outta 10. :point_up_2:

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Those won’t be stereotypes when I’m done I assure you :smiling_imp:

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