I love this so far- your writing is very descriptive. Can’t wait to read more.
I love it!!!
I love it so far! I’d appreciate a few more options with MC’s reactions to other characters, though. I don’t mean that we need lots of options or anything, more like that moments when MC reacts with a certain specific personality, especially at the beginning of a story, that we didn’t choose.
Example: when they roll their eyes at Hypnos and the text says they’re too exasperated to reply. That kind of thing, usually, is written in a more neutral tone if there aren’t options, or authors give the reader the choice of how to react. Maybe that will be there later, as this was a short demo. Just letting you know my thoughts
But your writing is very nice, and I’m super interested in the story. Team husband so far and very intrigued about the secret RO!
thank you! i’ll keep a note of this!
i feel bad for Eros… my “husband”? Looking forward to the ROs
I love the concept! The demo reminds me a little of my favorite greek myth “Eros and Psyche”. I’ll keep a close eye on this WIP.
Thanks to the prologue I will never be able to choose a ro who isn’t Eros, I’ll come back to you love
Don’t know if just me but when I try to click on the link it either sends me to the other WIP (through Olympus) or don’t go through at all
thanks for reporting! the file should be working properly now, and should no longer transport you to the other wip.
I hope this won’t be sad. But I can’t wait for the blood wrenching angst.
What if mc gets with other ro other than Eros Pls . No husband I’ll be loyal to the bitter end on my first play through.
I’m quite curious is it a trend than that now-a days in tv, novelas, almost anything involving hades that he’s portrayed as tired. Glad to see so many authors showing him love in their own ways.
love the wip so far! just something i noticed, when i chose Elias for a name Hypnos said you look very much like a lanthe, love the way Hypnos is written and can’t wait to see more!
thanks for reporting, i’ll look into it later and fix it!
Oh really good start. The prologue definitely got me hooked. I agree that we need more options about how MC act or feel. Especially toward others RO, I was quite surprise that we didn’t get any shy/bold flirt option/reaction for when Hypnos is flirting with us. Or just get to decide our first reaction to him really.
I’m sure others RO are good buuuuut…I’m team husband
thank you! i’m still working on adding more reactions for the mc instead of the initial one or two, so this really helps!
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