Whiskey-Four Release Thread [November 7th, 2024]

Like I said real fancy names for a street kid in a dystopian future…makes me think maybe, just maybe the mc wasn’t born a street kid. But I guess we’ll see.

They did live on the street as a kid and enlisted in the military and not as an officer like you’d expect from rich or influential kids, which is why I was thinking abusive home…but it could be something else too.

Maybe, before joining the military? But if that’s the case GUNI would probably have known that name and they do not. After the army the mc has had a long string of aliases.

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They could have renamed themselves later in life.

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These aren’t just fancy names, they are all names of popular roman emperors (well except Julius but you know, he counted in spirit). Ulysses might be wrong in thinking this is MC’s real name (these are good choices for an alias) or as mentioned it’s a hint about MC’s real background’s way posher.

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oof, the anomaly reminds me of shy guy. That’s gonna suck for whiskey.

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Hoky shit its a SCP!

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Fixed!

Lol that’s not exactly what I was going for…

I wonder…

A whole two letters different. A master of disguise, that one.

Yup. All except Julius and Agrippa, but both were powerful Romans in their own right.

I’ll step right out and confirm that it is the MC’s real name.

Definitely has a similar vibe.

No foundation to help you here, though.

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I chose Hadrian, the wall-builder seems to fit the mc best, at least with what we know thus far, imho.
MC is fighting to keep bad things that threaten his society out, just like his namesake, it is also emotionally applicable due to the many mental walls the mc seems to have built around themselves.
Lastly I figure Hadrian makes for an easy earliest alias/street kid name of Harry.

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I chose Constantine.

In my headcanon it’s an old family name. :slight_smile:

Lots of people in trenchcoats named John (or Johanna if you like the Netflix series) in that family tree.

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Really fun update! I like the way that the worldbuilding is naturally conveyed in the narrative. I’m enjoying the dots slowly connecting to each other… I’m intrigued :eyes: Also, after reading Ulysses/Ulyssa’s “childish, stupid fantasy”, I can safely say that me, the player, will make an effort to make their wish come true :sweat_smile:

That’d be awesome! The vast majority of my characters aren’t attracted to one singular gender and I’d love to have that here, too, if possible.

Just some small errors and suggestions to report.

(Still in part 1) Typo, either missing a dot or has one extra full stop.

(Still in part 1 also) English isn’t my first language so this might be me reading it wrong, but shouldn’t it be “go unanswered”?

I assume the similar sentences back-to-back are there to emphasize the “familiar conclusion”? At first I thought they were events in succession so two glass shatterings and two screams.

I think that this might flow better if it said “My name is irrelevant—but my occupation isn’t.” or “My name is not relevant—but my occupation is.”

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Does Whiskey-Four take place in the same universe as I, The Forgotten One? Even if it doesn’t, will there be Easter eggs in this story from ITFO?

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The following is not a demo update.

I’m about two day’s worth of writing behind schedule, but I’m certainly still making good progress. A bunch of the elements of the conspiracy are stringing together in this one, I’m actually pretty excited to see what y’all think.

I should have it done in the next two weeks, hopefully sooner, but no promises are made. It’s shaping up to be a decent bit shorter than the previous two, but I don’t see any reason to artificially drag out plot points.

No, ITFO is explicitly a fantasy realm while Whiskey-Four features the actual earth.

Probably lol

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This is great!

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Oh boy, another work from the author of ITFO? Gotta read this

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Can’t wait to see what amazing content you’ve put out today OP!

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This has somehow went under my radar, another WiP by one of my favourite authors has gone under my radar, :joy: .

Good luck with this one Bacon!

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Finally got around to playing this one too and damn man, damn. You are truly living up to your username! These games are like a piece of bacon done perfectly right, deliciously satisfying and even addicting at points!

I will be watching your career with great interest.

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cool so you’re not just a time traveler who’s seen medieval military wars but also a time traveler who’s been involved in future corporate espionage and assassination, bet you have an aiu dossier lying around

can we get a third series based on your experiences on survival in prehistoric times or the ice age too?

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@LiliArch Glad you enjoyed it!

Good to hear

Thanks!

You flatter me lol

I will neither confirm nor deny.

I’d tell you, but then I’d have to kill you.

We’ll see. I’ve got a ton of ideas for future stories once ITFO’s sequel and this one are sorted. Thinking maybe a historical-fantasy Renaissance Italy? Historical fiction about being a Varangian guard based off of the life of Harald Haldrada?

I should probably stop brainstorming or I’ll impulsively start a third WIP lol.

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Stamford Bridge…OH GOD…the memories…

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This sounds super cool, but you’re gonna run yourself ragged if you start anything else :joy:

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