Not quite an error? I think. But around the interrogation scene with Keiran, if the officer survives, she asks about the ark ship right before and we warn her against going anywhere near it. Then, again outside she considers going aboard the ship and we warn her again. And again she goes “I shouldn’t ask should I?”
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Shonin literally has my whole heart man like reading those last few paragraphs ached inside dude, mans was a boss from the getgo and his departure solidified the position of a real mf og. Storys more lit than when Santa comes down the chimney and I frankly love this sh*t
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So this is why Shonin is considered a fling and not a romance…
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It’s been awhile since I checked out this WIP (like, a long while. Not sure why it’s taken me so long), so I thought I’d give it another read through. I have to say, it’s really good! It’s well written, the story is very interesting, and I love the characters. I don’t have anything constructive to say, but I do have a quick question. Is this going to be a standalone or a series? I ask because some aspects feel like a standalone (the plot, the existence of epilogues), but others feel like a series (the progression of the romances, the part in the description about changing the hair style later on). I think it can work well either way, though I always prefer more than less 
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Is this story complete?
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really love this game and im gonna do another play through tomorrow but that ending felt chopped and im not sure im at the real ending …ill holler back later…but again…i love this game…cause im so in love with my crazy childhood friend like any real anime fan should be 
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Bacon is working on the final sections of it
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God, this is so good!
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I like this story so much that I will pay for it when the official version comes out. I really like the character of Julius, his interaction with MC, which is very sexual. I wonder if MC can get back together with him? Does it have a good ending? I’m sorry for the confusion, because English is not my native language.
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Does Bacon have a patreon or something?
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Ah. Thank you. I’ll wait for the full release then.
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Hey author , I hope I’m not too late I just found out your wip and its mind blowing and I have a suggestion or request whatever you say which is if possible could mc (partially or fully) absorb or learn the ability of the beings or anomalies(I mean the beings or anomalies who go against our world physics rule and whose name you shouldn’t pronounce or speak nor you should ever meet that beings eye even in recorded footage video or else that beings or anomalies will know whereabouts you and come to hunt you down to keep its existence hidden.) and if mc cannot do that then if possible give mc the chance to do so or instead give something much more powerful to mc like mc can be able to learn and use arcane science & magic hence mc become not only a powerful soldier but also a very powerful magician or sorcerer who weild arcane magic & also use arcane science to counter and kill such beings, because i think without such ability mc is super weak, incompetent & useless to even think about confronting such beings in comparison to such dangerously powerful beings with their ability to go against every physics rule. Without such power ability our mc will never gonna come alive on confronting those beings also give mc chance to reconcile their old love. I don’t mean to add magic or something like that , what I mean is mc should also acquire a powerful technological abilities like some very powerful weapon or armour like ironman or just enhance their body by using advance science and technology which will make mc able to go against every physics law like those beings or anomalies thus mc too become equally powerful to those beings or anomalies.
Again I’ll repeat that this is just request and suggestion not order or demand or anything like that and I’m saying this because I fear that you too might end up misunderstanding my request and suggestion to something like arrogant demand or forceful order or something like that because that was how my previous request and suggestion was misinterpreted by an idiot author(not you offcourse) and his idiot fans who take offence and reprimand me by saying that I’m demanding, forcing, and ordering him which is pressuring him thus deteriorating his mood thus making him unable to write down anything at all and his fans too said that I don’t have any right to demand or force my demand from author when I’m not even paying author and his fans not just stop there they go even one step ahead and started flagging my comment one by one which ended up me getting flagged by COG moderator not only on that comment but also on one of my old comment and I ended up getting banned for entire 31 days or one full month and my entire achivement and progress of my account deleted thus I ended up becoming beginner again like when I start my account for the first time, now I cannot post more than one reply in the same forum or wips.
So again I’ll say this it is just suggestion and request not arrogant demand or forceful order or something like that.
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Hell no, we already rarely get interactive science-fiction, so I hope we don’t start adding magic or whatevever to this one.
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Hell no I don’t mean to add magic or something like that , what I mean is mc should also acquire a powerful technological abilities like some very powerful weapon or armour like ironman or just enhance their body by using advance science and technology which will make mc able to go against every physics law like those beings or anomalies thus mc too become equally powerful to those beings or anomalies.
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Yeah I don’t think it’s the kind of story that would take this direction. And I don’t think it would benefit from it if it did.
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Most of the danger the anomalies pose comes from
them being mostly outside human perception and physical influence. Adding a absurdly powerfull tech or equipment that counters them would make the galaxy-ending event that is their arrival less scary.
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We’re already a cyborg (our spine & hand/arm sorry if this is somewhat wrong haven’t read it in i while) so I don’t think we will be getting any sort of suit like Ironman
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Just gave the whole thing a read through. Really entertaining stuff.
I enjoyed I, Forgotten One quite a bit, and this one didn’t disappoint either. Looking forward to the final release.
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I LIVE!!!
The book is finished. I am probably going to spend upward of a few months polishing and tweaking. I really want to make sure it is fully smooth and shiny before I submit it for publication. This is going to be a standalone work, and it’s currently around 380,000-400,000 words. Whiskey’s story will conclude in this book, but I am quite happy with how the world shaped out, so I may make additional novels some day in the future set in the same universe.
I am now turning to you guys, the readers. Now that the skeleton of the work is ready, is there anything specific you would like to see included? I’m mostly referring to routes you wish you would be able to take. Different branches to the story.
Also: I think I’m going to rebrand the romances with Driver and Castle to flings. The entire book’s plot, minus the epilogue, takes place over like 100 hours. There is no real way for a true romance to blossom imo, and the more adult, casual tone of sexual encounters in this work just isn’t suited to falling in love in five days.
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