What a Brilliant Existence! (NOW ON TALES!)

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I love this wip and I love Dani! Thank you for creating them. Keep up the good work, I’ll be waiting for more!!!

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Cool concept great writing so far! Looking forward to more!:clap::slightly_smiling_face:

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HEY GUESS WHAT.

The update is here, and so is Chapter Two!

This is a shorter one, but there is a greater amount of variation. If you could, here’s a few questions I’d appreciate you answering to help me with writing and playtesting:

Summary

  • Do you feel like you knew enough about Naomi/the corporation to have an opinion when asked?

  • How did you feel about the MC’s different experiences in regarding to clothing depending on their gender? Was it accurate, or relatable? If not, is there something you’d say it’s missing?

  • If you’re playing a mlm or wlw: how did you feel about the flavor text (right now, in only Dani’s romance choice) and MC’s inner turmoil regarding their own sexuality?

  • What did you think of the romance choices? Was there something missing? Do you think it’s too soon for MC to feel this way?

  • Did the MC have enough of a voice during group conversations, like the one in Sydney’s clinic, or did they feel flat and lifeless?

Also, some text about Naomi during some choices in Sydney’s clinic might feel repetitive, due to some errors while writing. Please tell me if this is the case.

Enjoy, and have a nice Saturday night! Be honest and tell me what you thought! :slight_smile:

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Yaaay looking forward to reading it!

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so cool can’t wait to play it

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Woot! Update!

It is two in the morning and I was going to bed… glad I don’t work tomorrow.

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Awesome chapter two! It was fun to play it. I loved the clinic scene

But I really didn’t see that thing with Jade coming

Just a pity we didn’t got a chance to flirt with Sydney

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Thank you, everyone! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Don’t worry, @Bizimo. You’ll get your chance with Sydney soon enough.

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Can you tell us the ROs age? (Please)

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There you go.

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Doesn’t say the ages though

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From the Tumblr:

None of the ROs will have defined ages (the MC will be the only one), but I’d say Sydney’s on their mid to late-twenties.

Alex is the closest to MC’s age, probably at around 19 or 20 years old. Dani and Max are both in their early twenties, getting closer to mid-twenties than either of them would like.

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Hi everyone.

During the weekend, I’ll be doing in-character asks to celebrate 300 (!) Tumblr followers. If you’d like, you can already send your ask here. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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This… this is some sad story. Darn… good job btw.
Can’t wait for the next update :slight_smile:

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so right now maybe you have 588 people love your work

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@ydefsoul Thank you! :relaxed:

@Takashi_Shin Holy shit, I hadn’t thought about it that way :exploding_head: That’s crazy.

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Can’t wait for the next update ! :laughing:

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Finally, a relatable protagonist!

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I love it and want more :sweat_smile: my mc basically has Stockholm syndrome… It makes for a great story though!

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Hey, guys!

I’ve noticed recently I’ve been neglecting the forums, which is a shame. I’m much more active on WaBE’s Tumblr, but that doesn’t mean I should just ignore the people who only go here!

Anyway, writing has been going well. I’ve been a bit busy with college and work, but I really want to have chapter three out before the end of the year. Last week, I started posting a snippet of whatever scene I’m working on every Sunday. Thought it’d might interest some of you. (I probably should post these here, too, huh?) Anyway, here’s the latest snippet I just posted.

Hope everyone has a good week. :slight_smile:

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