You described it perfectly. And if you think Jirel is bad, then you haven’t met Lea’s misogynist father. He is by the far the worst character here.
Not only does he doesn’t acknowledge the Female MC, but he casually assaults the MC and takes her fenice that she got from Calwell. And the MC what? Is she just supposed to forget about this assualt? I know who I want to kill the most.
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wtf, and I don’t remember being called ugly in the game, it was the opposite from my experience? and why you want to steal beautiful girls heart, a cheat menu etc etc, there is no such a need for them, when we are still untrained knights, maybe after the training arc it will make sense.
and I never felt pathetic, I just not really interacted with Jerile anyway, and maybe, me always making the right choices and beating everyone is ass didn’t let me notice such a thing, and leading the group is enough to prove you are better than Jerile, I don’t think Jerile can lead anyway…
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You saying, he only does that to a female MC?
This entire WIP is weird. Its completely Heterosexual but Tarak keeps showing interest in the female MC, but then when the option to flirt with her appears, it’s greyed out? It’s like this WIP is actively trying to be Heterosexual very hard, but the female ROs flirt with the female MC, but actually don’t flirt. It’s so bad that when the MC gets stung by a wasp Kelly has to kiss and suck the poison out of the female MC, but not Tarak because she is also a woman? But she keeps flirting with the MC. What is going on? Can the Female MC romance other Female characters? I haven’t gotten a concrete answer from the author.
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Charge energy, stab sword and swing. Keep repeating that process.
First off i’ll start by saying great work so far on the game. I can see the inspiration which helped you, naruto, a little bit of bleach etc. Doesn’t stand out too much but a fan will see it easily. Seems like a few people dislike being shown up by our rival, but i’d counter and say its about time. Too many games immediately feed into that power fantasy immediately. Possibly losing our crush to our rival will make for interesting paths. If the author delivers on that and give us realistic reactions to turmoil. Heartbreak is something we all experienced but nothing makes for better character development.
Game can go one of two ways. It’ll continue to be fleshed out properly and deliver a emotional rollercoaster like no other.
Or be rushed, while lacking proper details to bring everything to life.
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How can you beat jirell in The first first.
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She is not flirting… Tarak just admires Fmc.
Nope
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Bruh other people say about stealing heart in regard to Jeril when male MC ask about Jeril with his friends and classmates , also about cheat menu request it is also requested by someone else and reading their request I got the same idea hence also requested about Cheat menu with author and yes Jeril too can lead people because he have a higher intelligence and tactical than MC so Jeril can also lead people , infact he even told that either he make rescue planning thus end up leading people or another person[that boy name start with letter M { kind of forgotten his name }] because he reason that only he and other person or that boy whose name start with letter M have high intelligence and tactical enough to be able to make efficient rescue planning and lead people efficiently not MC and classmates and friends of MC agree with Jeril statement.
Bruh, you getting these problems because your stats ain’t good, repeat, level up, repeat, find a better way, repeat until you are perfect, and when do they say MC is ugly, I wanna see it, pls send if you can.
and for the first thing you said, I only find it better, our rivalry is supposed to be better than you, so you can be motivated to be better than him, lets just wait until the rest of the story.
I remember the author said something about it doesn’t matter if you are trying to romance someone yet, until much later, maybe in book 2 (I hope I remembered right)
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our defeat at the Jirell hand’s is a canon event
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I didn’t think that it would happen, but I fell hard for Jirell, and I usually hate jerks in games. I suppose with how good your writing is, it is no real surprise. I am eagerly awaiting the continuation of this game!
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What!? I thought they can? I know that the first female ROs you meet isn’t romanceable by a fmc but I thought some of the other ones were romanceable by them, like Catalina for example?
Is this game still going?
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Yeah. It’s very much still going but I will have to do a revamp and change some things. Some people have complained that the game has been lacking in certain areas and there has been a good amount of criticism I’ve seen about the game on different mediums. I’ll fix what needs fixed and try to sort as many errors as needed, but the game is still actively being worked on.
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Father is normally overprotective even if it’s somewhat embarrassing to their child, I believe Lea father is not really misogynistic but rather protective of her, Father often did that to their daughter treating them like helpless princess, Lea’s Father is actively seeking Lea, unlike other people he actually care despite his seemingly antagonistic behavior towards Lea or like people said Misogynistic.
I mean my father is like that too trying yo prevent me from doing stuff myself, it just sort come out in a bad way, uniform type of man normally doesn’t get to express themselves much and they often come out as gruff and rough although they do care.
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You should make a tumblr page for this IF, it’s better for the author x reader dynamic, it will make easier for you to talk about the issues with the public and it’s also easier for the reader to know that the game is active. It’s cool if you don’t want, this is just an idea
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Exactly! You nailed his character perfectly.
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Ya don’t say? I think that would be a good idea, though I’m not too familiar with it. I’ll still give it a try.
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