Only got to Chapter 2, will continue and update past it.
First, enjoying it so far.
Second, issues found so far.
1: Event with spearman, father hands a necklace over, says “son,” when a daughter.
2: chapter 1 keep being called Zizou? Id assume disguising self as a boy, but not brought up, boys orphanage?
3: knight with paper says, lad instead of lass
4: there is another girl in the group by end of 1, why is the mass announced with lads then? Unless disguised, then possibly a mention of bindings is necessary for the busty option vs slim option for girls?
Why concern over a girl in the group of potential students for knighthood, if a girl as well. It makes sense if hiding oneself as a boy, very little. It’d be more esctatic that there is another girl wanting to be a knight instead of how a boy thinks there.
Onto chapter 2
Chapter 2:
One option says: Let best man win, is odd, can stay, but odd. I personally would use Let the best person win, instead. But to a bully like him, i’d used, let the best lady win, on purpose.
Knight says after striking Jirrel in neck, says lad instead of lass.
The last one also is lad vs lass deal, when Sir Caldwell says lads. When specifically calling me and Jirrel out near end of chapter 2.
Onto 3!
Good so far!
No wonder they cant get knights/soldiers to defend against raiders. Wowzers, just as bad as some other countries that failed war because of their weird requirements.
Fun to continue though!
Chapter 3
I chose busty over thin, also put band over low collar top around neck. Not the arm where you wrote it at after selection. In other words, he reached for my boobs. That is where i will leave that line as to determine how to fill that change in for my selection on the band.