Walls of Natrun [207k words] [Updated October 6th]

Randomly remembered this story and wanted to play again. It has only gotten better!!!

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gramatical error in warplan.txt

Patreon Update. I posted the newest version of the game for paid users, adding about 22k words of content. A public update, hopefully containing the entirety of Chapter Five, should come out within two weeks.

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Chapter Five. I updated the public version of the game so that it includes all hitherto patreon-exclusive content, plus a few thousand additional words. It’s not as much as I originally planned, but chapter five is already the longest scene in the game, so I decided to release what I have.

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It’s a small error but when I click to drink the tea I am given coffee instead. Such blasphemy (/joking)

(Will edit if i find any more)

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I thoroughly enjoyed my first dip into this amazing world of the Saturn colonies. Always happy to see settings in space that visit the one and only Solar system in the galaxy (the planetary system we live in)

I…totally started working on romancing my main rival Victor (my sovereign Alexandra was quite fond of him)

The visit to the capital definitely interesting

Played through the newest content, and there seems to be some weird error right at the very end.

Elvira’s name doesn’t appear in some scenes which confused me for a moment because I didn’t know who I was talking to for a bit, lmao.

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Small coding problem, but I chose to drank tea {aka fish food} and wa`s still given coffee by the servant

Omg! I’m going to Natrun the walls in this chapter!

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