That’s so freaking funny because in the scene I’m currently writing MC is watching the manavision (not without problems because the MC won’t have anything easy lol). But later on I’ll defo use that line, I need it, one of the most iconic of the Hellsing abridged version 
Thanks for the comment !
Ohhh this is for sure an important part of the plot which will be delved in soon, when the MC gets to their assigned corps, you best believe they will get a lot of opps there
Oh damn, I need to check that out, thanks !
You should add the very enthusiastic walks lines
UPDATE 06/08 > I’m pretty thrilled by the fact that the most liked death path is the gambling den (actually as of today, the train path has 14 votes, but adding up both the gambling den “good” and “evil” path, you get 21 votes). It’s the most recent one, and I feel that my writing has improved from writing the parking one, the first one I wrote, emotional sniff, to this one. Whether it’s the plot of that path, or even its writing, I’m glad people liked it because I had pleasure writing it !
Might do that lol !
Lol i havent played all death paths so didnt vote but glad people are liking it and that you enjoyed writing it 
heheh true you probably played the parking one as you’ve been around since day 1 on the game lol. If you got time, do try the gambling den, I’m looking for reviews about it. The poll is good for quantitative review, but quality wise, I still don’t know what people liked the most about it because I don’t get a lot of feedback content wise.
Thanks for the comment as always !
Yaaaaaaaaay~ to think I could love this WIP even more!
fufufufu~, thanks for making the day even more fun!
Personally I don’t get into debates but I just like how you work you’re working out your own idea of a story that makes me do this
When I hear you got content!
Did a breif run through of the gambling path will do more when i can later on lol. I was gollowing the good side so to speak for this run and i enjoyed it so good job. i can see why people enjoyed it the most.
There are some intial questions i have but first wanted to point out two things first there is a typo towards the start of it will see if i spot it when next i play… but there is a bigger issue sorta when were talking to god there is a instance of a paragraph repeating not in the bad way it looks natural far as that goes. What throws me off kilter so to speak is that its describing something that has allready been stated as happening with the whole world restarting at a slowed pace except us as MC. I would suggest changing of that paragraph at least somewhat so it flows better.
Thats all i have at the moment but will say more after play again gotbsome thoughts just want to give another playthrough and probally sleep after work before doing so lol
And thank you for being such a good reviewer !!!
Wow…just thanks, this really cheered me up. I really try to convey that idea of a story that grew in my head a few years ago now, a mix of all the anime, manwha/manhua, pop culture I love so much and the concept of choices script games that I had discovered around 2020.
When I started, this game, I wasn’t really sure about myself, I was like, I’ll be mad cringe, my writing will be so awkward etc…and I’d end up being cyber bullied or some crap lol, but it’s comments like this that make me glad I decided to start even thought I didn’t feel good enough.
I still don’t feel good enough but the feedback and encouragement make getting better worth it.
Thanks !
(PS: gosh sorry I love yapping, got a severe case of uncurable yapsis)
Oh so you’re among the kind ones huh ? Most people (who voted) are mad ruthless like I’m scared, do y’all hate your coworkers that much ? Like to straight up want to sell their organs is crazyyyy
Glad you ended up liking the path too !
I’ll check the inconsistency you’ve talked about,
Thanks !
My natural bent is good paths for most games lol but inevitably i allways try all paths
Uhhh no I normally will walk on light side if the light side doesn’t give me reason to hate them, I can go to gray moral territory for a bit since this is a war story like for example enemy is holed up in building and have civilian in it if there is no other way I am okay with bringing down the building but to do outright war crimes like genocide I have none of that.
Not much that can sway me to do something evil outright unless the reward is hard to pass like immortality for example or some insane power, temporary reward like ranks or wealth is not something I am interested.
One thing that can make me go evil from the get go is if the world is dark fantasy setting or/and the “good guy” basically the same as bad guy, like the good guy torture MC or blackmailing MC or enslaving MC.
Gotta go evil or anti-hero whenev available. So tired of the usual goody goody archetypes that are spammed in most animes, movies, and games.
Ehh in the spirit of roleplay I can’t breach the role like suddenly go evil it if there is no reason or motivation to do so.
My MC is not insane enough or have background to do so beside the friends we have is cool people, so far nothing wrong with MC 2nd life.
It doesn’t matter if it cringe or not it just sometime life is mundane like that, there is no need to plot/scheme all the time beside the story said MC want to use this life to fulfill what they lack in previous life which is in my opinion is lack of connection, MC previous life is boring work life and have no gf/bf and wasting away at cutthroat company.
I imagine the trauma of being murdered, betrayed, and knowing that there’s beings that are able take everything from you on a whim would have a huge effect.
I know it would for me… that just ain’t something I would forgive or forget. Hell… I’d be surprised if traumatic event like that DIDN’T make me cruel, jaded, apathetic, vengeful etc.