UPDATE POLL POST 500 (06/03) the wars we wage (Now with 180k words)! isekai fantasy game

So after reading everything i absolutely loved the story. My only thing i could say was missing was the fact you couldnt weild a katana/odachi as a weapon. Given the anime/webtoons easter eggs were peppered in there figure that kind of weapon would be a no brainer.

Not saying the are not cool who doesn’t want to weild a big ass claymore as a weapon lol

Just throwing it out there this is just an opinion of some randome dude on a frourm lol still absolutely love the story.

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Well heck yea, thats awesome to hear as a fellow anime-aniac i completely understand the want for a katana, so thank you for reading my comment and considering adding it to the game.

As i said all the weapons were awesome and unique like not gonna like didnt even know west afriacans had swords to weild had to look that one up its pretty dope looking if the same one that pops up on google

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The ‘‘romance’’, is like in any other isekai with dense/beta mc, I would have liked to be given the choice to be as confident as I am in real life, I like to read and play rpgs, that doens’t mean I don’t train, I don’t have skills and hobbies, and that I’m not a confident fella, my mc would never be a beta or dense, or what is worse, a combination of the two, but I read through all of it, and my mc really is like that and I have no option to costumize his character at all whatsoever, at least regarding romance, I can get a kiss from someone in under an hour and a date the next day, and if I ever had a cute childhood friend I most certainly would be married to her by now, so I don’t get identified at all by someone who cannot speak his intentions clearly or gets all shy and flimsy like a flower in the presence of a woman.

Imagine using the word “beta” unironically.

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Hey now don’t insult the Alpha

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Hi, first of all thanks for leaving a comment on my wip, I’ll try to answer every point you’ve raised.

I’ll give it to you, the romance isn’t meant until way later in the story, which is why I took out the romance tag from my work a while ago because it would have been dishonest to tease people with something I won’t give to them right away.

One of the big reason why you couldn’t get a childhood romance with D is also quite simple, you, as a player might not be as old as the MC, but the character is 30+, and I can’t see myself writing an adult grooming teenagers. You’ll be able to romance people when they get out of the grooming territory.

The denseness of the mc kind of comes as a result of the previous point, a responsible adult wouldn’t actually encourage minors to be infatuated with them, it’s more of a denial than being unknowing.

And that’s a bit problematic if you think that MC is not confident, because that means a mis characterisation from me for the MC. The MC is quite confident : they had a high paying job in their past life, are standing about in term of strength in their new life. They just try to not show it off because it’s useless. If that isn’t clear enough, you’ll get a few shows of arrogance from the MC in the next update if you choose the right paths.

Once again, thanks for commenting, and I hope that you’ll find your questions answered, if not, feel free to ask more

I understand, that is quite annoying and this problem stems from the fact that I didn’t develop all the possible path yet, but as I’ll keep on working, you’ll get more and more customisation. Here, I can tell you that in the next update, if you decide to stick around, you’ll get a new death path where the mc is a bit more shady and less righteous than now.

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Absolutely lovely!

Ahhhhhhh, I can’t wait for more, though there are some parts of it that left me in want, but those can be fixed with some grammar checks, and boi, the mc is in for a ride, after all, I chose to find love, and I’m getting 3 already… and that suspenseful end for the update.

chefs kiss If only God didn’t try to mind break me, kek, the power up was lovely, but…there’s no free cake, except my Mc’s cake which was magically enhanced!

Thanks for the hard work, I’ll reply this again~

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Also, being able to say Jackpot! While summoning my version of Ebony and Ivory~ Is just the cherry on top~

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Thanks a lot for the kind and super heartwarming comment ! I’m glad you like the game so far !!!

Yeah I thought that leaving the player the choice of the summon command was absolutely necessary. I gave a few pre set referencing a few anime/manga/manwha I like, but I believe that it’s better if we can all live out our childhood dreams :rofl:

Thanks for sticking around !

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It’s every chunni’s dream~ Dante would be proud of my choice~

After a few more playthroughs, I’m still hyped, and finally found out some truths that I apparently glossed out during my first play through… The past still comes to haunt us, even if the last life was over, in an image of an acquaintance hopefully…this time, things wont end badly.

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Yay isekai! Not sure why I didn’t dive into this earlier :thinking:, and just left it in my bookmarks to stew. Oh well gave me playable content. Anyway very much enjoyed what I’ve read so far! Mind you only done 1 playthrough. So gotta jump back there at least another 2-3 times.
Moving on I enjoyed the character interactions and funny side remarks/thoughts?.. Either way I’m looking forward to next update and what’s to come keep up the great work. You doing a good job so far. :kissing_heart:

Typo's etc...


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her gender flipped

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Perhaps place in bold at the top that this is a POV change, so we don’t get lost :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:


Probably didn’t get all the typos and grammatical errors :upside_down_face:, but hope these help for now.
Anyway looking forward to next installment

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There’s no rush to address this since it is fairly minor, and looks like most people don’t run into it the way my MC does, but you might be interested to know there’s a bit of ‘amnesia’ in the demo about one of MC’s possible traits.

Here's the relevant screenshots in chronologial order

After picking the “tired” choice, and it being acknowledged by Adama here in the following screenshot…

For whatever reason in the next picture, it would seem the Empress was given misinformation about my MC’s attributes, because Adama himself remarked on my MC being a bit of a weakling for napping from being tired.

Which feels a little like the game doesn’t have the ability to remember the earlier choice yet. It is fine since no one else seems to have noticed or commented on this one yet.

I wouldn’t worry about it until a more major change is ready to be implemented. Take as much time as you need! :wink:

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Omg thanks so much for playing and giving such good constructive feedback and typos reports ! I’ll put a pov switch sign next update (I was soon going to put a bit more flare in my work, with relationship stats but you made a really good point)

I’m glad I manage to make things a bit fun !

Once again, thanks for commenting and playing, hope you’ll stick around for more :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Ohhh that’s true indeed, the phrasing is a bit off with the choice you made ! Still, I’ll change it up a bit to fit more but you can also notice that Adama does acknowledge some skills of the MC. Which means that I’ll probably either change a bit what the Empress says, or just make an extra code line for the people who made this choice :grin:

Thanks as always for your throughout feedback, it’s really heartwarming seeing people take some time of their day to give a bit of feedback ! :blush:

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Dev update
I’m super inspired nowadays ! But the problem is that I’m more thinking about the scenes I’ll write than actually writing them. Then when I start writing and I check how much I have and I only see 1k of words added ? Almost gets me crying and shit lol

But quick question while I’m here to have some kind of benchmark

  • 20k words (I’m halfway there so not so far away)
  • 30k words (longer wait oc)
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Well that’s it for my intervention, don’t hesitate to leave a comment if you got something to ask ! : D

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You’re doing your best author-san~ But do take ample rest and take care of yourself, thanks for the lovely work that you do!

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Thanks a lot for the kind wishes ! You too get plenty of rest whenever you can : D

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Um, Slim Shady what is that could someone please tell me

Lol its a very old saying at this point so much so i dont even recall the exact meaning anymore.

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It’s from a song that released 23 years ago

It was hugely popular at the time

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