I am currently working on a project. I would like to get it tested out. At the moment, it is only possible to go east, as you’ll find. Every other option will give you an error.
What I am looking for is criticism on my writing (which I myself am not fond of), the use of pronouns (relation with gender, etc), sentence order and sense. Everything you can help me on would be much appreciated.
It is currently very short and your choices will not matter much due to it being the prologue. I am aiming for a game with not many small choices, but few huge ones.