I like this WIP. It was very fun to read. After I read the last few comments (before playing) it really confused me an thought there was a character named after the ship. But it’s really funny to have human-ships. The battles are fun, too. I really look forward to the next update. PS I took Thanatos
I just one question. Is Zena a RO.
BTW after one dream sequence the is a bug. Instead of doing a pagebreak, there stand just pagebreak. going to search it so I can screenshot it.
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Yes zena/zastin is a ro. Everyone that is in the relationship page in the stat is a ro.
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I found the bug by the way tnx for reporting it.
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Ok I’m glad you found it. After restarting I couldn’t find it.
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Well just had an odd playthrough. I chose to be legendary for my knowledge as the “son of dawn” which brought me to 35, which then promptly was insufficient to be successful the next time I had a knowledge check.
So apparently my character is legendary for a skill he isn’t actually competent in.
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That’s strange everything should be working fine based on the codes.
Did that happen during the fight with Pamela? If so then you should use your highest skill first.
This should show up if you passed the 2nd knowledge check.
Now that the gigantic ship is a little bit closer you can now easily scan the ship for weaknesses. As you scan the ship you realise that the ship’s two main guns at the front is a little bit damaged, not caused by battle, but a damage caused of being used too much.
You quickly aim for those guns, you quickly ordered (trinityname) to adjust her guns to aim on the two turrets infront of the enemy ship. (trinityname) fires and the some of the shells landed on one of the turrets destroying it on the process.
If it’s with the fleet battle two of your skills must be at 40.
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Yes, that must have been the issue.
I was trying to find the cutoff points for success, stat wise.
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got say your art work is cool
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Tnx.
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I’ll just leave it here
Also this.
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yes Bahamut won this fight
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Hahah that made me chuckle.
Also yeah your artwork is great! Yas the tsundere has won!
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Just finished the demo and it is a brilliant story, besides fron grammar it is an interesting read, have you thought of adding in a health bar for the ship in order to keep track of damages and also maybe a reputation bar as you have jumped from a graduate to basically a celebration captain having defended a retreat and also helped win some territory?
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I’m still working on it, but the health bar should be implemented on chapter three cause there’s no plot armor from there.
The destroyer x protector and unemphatic x emphatic works like a reputation bar. The destroyer x protector will going to be what the future generations will see you as, while the unemphatic x emphatic will going to be what your allies and enemies see you as.
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what you made make Trinity as story
That’s a tought question and also out of nowhere.
I’ve been thinking of making this story for a while now actually. At first I’m just making a some sort of short comic doodle on my sketchpad when I’m bored, then the doodles started to have a real story and during that time I was playing around choicescript. Then I was like “since I have come up with a lot of ending for this story maybe I should use this with my experiments on choicescript.” Then I started to make the meaningless doodles into a proper story. Then as I was making the story a lot of changes where made (your supposed to be able to play as a tank commander and as a pilot but I scraped it because the quality of the story started to go down). Then when I was reading my work I found out that my writing skills is not that good so I thought maybe sharing it to others and receiving feedback will help me improove.
Also Trinity has taken a very long way than it’s former self, the doodle one I mean. I also have some sort of interest in tanks, warships and soldiers.
I actually want to be a navy officer but my mom was so very very very against it she was like “I didn’t raise you so you could go and just be a cannon fodder” I’m not that mad though it was like my second choice for a career anyway, but I still think of the paths that will open for me if I have chosen that path, also I like being around the ocean, so maybe these things have influenced me in making this story.
I hope I answered your question.
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If your mom said it like that please say her she is comedy gold
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I know right? My dad and brother laugh when she said that, and I wasn’t sure of she was serious that time, turns out she was.
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I now how that feel I plan go to army to fix tank and APC but got talk down by my mom
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Wait, why did your mom talk you out of it? It sounds like you would’ve just been an Average Joe army mechanic not something extreme like a combat engineer.