Trial of the Demon Hunter (Chapter One/7k words of update demo available)

Yes, I first used a chain on the strong one, gas on second one and candle on third one. Then it made no mention of stopping her or how it was ended. Continued again and found the whole talk sequence to the witches about choice of punishment jumped straight to prison sequence.

I may need to restart and try again. Forgot to mention imp is a viper form before the encounter.

@jjc37
Hopefully I’ll have that fixed sometime tomorrow. Do you mean where you try to redeem the assassins?

Yes, that never came up as an option for me. Im not sure if viper caused the difference. First play thru I chose to hide the imp, second play thru I had him as a frog to poison the witches and kill them. This time I chose the viper with no choice of saving or killing.

@jjc37
Wow, I’m sorry. You’re supposed to be able to choose whether to capture, kill or redeem them. Did you never have that choice in any of your play throughs, or just your most recent one?

That was only with the last one it didnt pop up. Previous two were before an update happened.

I tried it in frog mode and hidden mode, it did ask how to deal with the witches. I also just checked the eagle route. It seems only one that it doesnt give the choice on what to do with witches is the viper path.

@jjc37
Thanks for catching that :)!

Sam i found a weird error i choose save the goblin to sell her to a farmer well that option directed me to kill her and bargain a lot of money for his finger. I LOVE THE LOOT VILLAGE SCENE MARA APROVES

@poison_mara
That is bizzare 0_0 thanks for pointing it out.

I’m glad you like it :smiley:

@Samuel_H_Young Selling the goblin to the farmer works fine.

@DSeg
Hmm…maybe Apple messed it up when updating it? That’s the only thingg I can think if.

@poison_mara
Can you try again and see what happens?

Here’s another 1* review.

“GARBAGE: There is an overload of text and a severe lack of chances. There is like 3 scenes and then the game’s over. Can’t believe I got suckered into paying for this.”

Hmm…I would say that the choices are quite frequent and numerous.

There ARE 9 scenes, not “is 3”

Uh, how exactly were you “suckered” into buying this?

A review like that sucks, but they are always hilarious to read. I’ll print and frame every bad review I get. They’ll be hanging in my room like diplomas.

@DSeg
Yeah; I have yet to read an intelligent review that’s below a 4. I severely doubt I ever will

Sorry it was my fault I return to an old playthrough from before the actual version . I am just trying again and in new play and works fine. :))
Edit
And about the reviews if I someday get publish I would post a prologue.
What do you think about game?


*fake_choice
    #This is shit buu
        Dear troll, who put no sense reviews You just read or looking blindly the text I put so effort in writing it. You pay for it and is your right valorate the game as you please. 
I only ask you to explain why you hate or not my work with coherence
. My challenge to replay this choosing other options after all, you already waste your money on this so why not look the other half of text before say this is damn to short.

@poison_mara
I left an author’s note at the end, inviting all readers to play again, and asking the people who didn’t enjoy it to tell me about it, instead of leaving a wordless bad review. Apparently it didn’t work very well with the bad reviewers, but you can’t exactly expect much from unintelligent belligerants, can you?

Exactly our dear trolls aren’t good readers, but why buy books in the first place?.
i mean you are vegetarian well you dont go to MacDonalds and buy the extremely carnivorous menu and then denouncing them to delivery you animal meat lol.

@poison_mara
That’s a very apt analogy xD

@everyone
For my next update, I’ll be correcting some stray typos and bugs, as well as paragraphing the whole story about twice as much so that it’ll be better for mobile readers. So for example: now there are 1,000 paragraphs. After the update, there will be 2,000 paragraphs.

In that guys defense… I actually can’t think of a way to end this sentence

@817819
99% Of these bad reviews leave me wondering if these people even read the story -_-