Found something
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I have a feeling this would blow up
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I was so gutted to miss out on Odessa Dating Games, this sounds like exactly what I was after.
Adding a Yandere princess to the mix? chefs kiss
I’ll be eagerly awaiting updates.
I’m also predicting it now: People will go feral to have the rival as a RO.
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Just a piece of friendly advice, one of, I think, the biggest complications with Odessa was that there were so many variations for things that it ran into major complexity issues. Ideally you try and keep that to a minimum so you don’t fall into the same trouble
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I’m just gonna tell you know now that character will never be an RO i won’t spoil why since it’s story related.
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IDK if it’s just me and I missed it but I didn’t get to customize the heir, which is supposed to be an option I think? Could be because I picked yandere mode? Also a few of your page breaks aren’t working right in the convenience store take out the trash route.
Same! Lol. I did a double take when I started reading about neon lights, then I started wondering if MC was going to be isekai’d before I realized that it was supposed to be set in modern times.
You can customize the heir when you work as a janitor and you’ll probably be able to customize the heir later on when you do the convenience store.
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Yeah don’t worry I’m not a big fan of rival romances personally. Just making an observation from other IFs that rivals to lovers is extremely popular.
I played through what’s there a couple times. I couldn’t customise the heir on yandere+cahsier route, I could on non-yandere+cashier and yandere+janitor.
Make that me three for being surprised it wasn’t medieval fantasy.
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yeah i was in the process of doing that for the cashier route and then i got side tricked with my things in real life and lowkey forgot but I’m working on it now
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I’m loving the yandere option 
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Hmm, is good.
This is honestly pretty good so far. My biggest gripe with it now though is how does the princess even know us. I am assuming that’ll be explained later on, but with no context it just makes me wonder how a sheltered princess would ever find us when were working in either a trashy motel or a run down store.
Wow, this sounds like an incredibly immersive and dramatic story — I love the concept of a commoner being thrust into a high-stakes royal competition. The yandere mode twist is especially intriguing and adds a whole new layer of intensity. I’ve been playing around with narrative games lately (in between rounds of NBA 2K20 APK on my phone 
), and this feels like something I could really get into. Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds!
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The whole bit about no one being allowed to know what they look like makes me wonder if they really are sheltered. It’s kind of perfect for an out of “they’ve been able to go do what they want (within specified boundaries, of course) because no one knows what they look like.” So they may be very well aware of who you are and what you look like from whatever experiences they’ve had while out slumming.
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Not sure if it’s caught yet but the “milf” bold isn’t bolded
I’m really interested in the concept! Is there any chance of having presets for the Heir’s appearance like you have for the MC? I like designing a character but doing it twice over is a little frustrating
I’ll be waiting for an update !
Noticed three things.
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Bryce finds the MC attractive, but only in the non-stalker route even with the exact same MC.
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After seeing TV broadcast about the ball in cashier stalker route, MC says to cap guy that they “Hate Being reminded of things i’ll never enjoy” despite picking the option that says they don’t care.
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Page breaks when taking out the trash as cashier in stalker route is broken.
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Yeah both bosses are awful but the cashier is down right creepy and disgusting. It’s probably a good thing we got fired. The motel sounds like they practiced for the firing in a mirror. I’m just wondering how it will go in the office.
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Btw this WIP is also really good so far. Please keep it up
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