Toggleable yandere option! I’d like 2 more plates.
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I love the idea of the story, the prince seems like a good man (I tried not to do the Yandere aspect 
but sadly failed ) I’m looking forward to more 
(bookmarked and favourited)
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I’m not sure if this is actually what’s happening or if the motel has a shop as well, but I think the convenience store option got crolled with the motel cleaning one somehow. You can’t complete either because suddenly, if you chose the motel, you’re working in a shop and if you chose the shop, it just kind of ends if you do anything other than take out the trash.
Hope this not end up in cold. Stay healthy
I’m curious if the heir is a yandere does the MC have something weird about them as well? Sometimes in toxic relationships it’s usually not just one person who’s messed up,both sides tend to have their own craziness😁
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This Project of mine is inspired by The Odessa Dating Games
Consider me hooked. Lowkey Hoping that we get at least a proper wage job though I’ll be honest. or a Normal work is fine too but I guess this is good if there’s actual reason for it.
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All right, not much to see yet but you have me interested. 
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That’s the total number of characters in the 1st chapter. When the player encounters specific characters like the drunk woman in the store route or the pimp in the motel route their responses will vary depending on the main character’s appearance and gender. i hope that answer your question.
Well I am sold.
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y’all are hilarious
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I found an error and I may be wrong but it occurs after choosing Heterochromia and trying to see the stats screen
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I was fighting that line of code all damn day but i fixed it 
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Great start, can’t wait to see more of the yandere heir keep up the great work
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Interesting premise, solid start and yandere heir easily bumps this up a few points depending on how it plays out. What can I say, everyone loves a good yandere
Can’t wait to see more
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good job I’m looking forward to seeing your work I’m sure it will be great 
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You got me there buddy.
We’re eating good, yandere lovers!
No I don’t care if we look like a construction crew, we’ll fix them!
Or maybe leave it be because it’s way hotter!
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Either that period needs to be a comma, or that ‘s’ needs to be capitalized.
There are some other minor grammar things, but I assume an eventual line edit once you’re done will catch them.
The main character’s combination of apathy and hope is interesting. The job is necessary (apparently) and soul-killing, but the MC does nothing to improve the situation (not even toss the multiple-days-old can of energy drink).
The description of the convenience store is well-done. It is a lot of detail, but that makes sense, as it feels like this is the MC’s world in the evenings. And mapping the space probably occupies most of her (I chose to be female) time.
I have to admit, though, the ‘life sucks and is terrible and will never improve and no one cares about you or even remembers the slightest detail about you and never will because you are a nothing person whose life amounts to nothing’ is getting a bit much for me, personally. Instead of feeling sympathy for/with the MC, I’m gettting annoyed by her.
(Also notice “thier” should be “their”).
And this is where I stopped.
Your writing is very descriptive, and you capture that sense of drudgery well. The MC frustrates me currently since they’re oh-so-determined to do what is necessary (so they have some hope), but still so very…down on themselves, apathetic, and content in their misery. Maybe it is just depression on the MC’s part, but I’ve had depressive bouts; I don’t care to relive them in-text.
So, overall, great descriptions and atmosphere with some grammar/spelling errors that a line edit will catch, but probably not for me right now.
ETA: That said, I am very intrigued by the potential romance with the Mastermind…
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ngl i thought this was gonna be a medieval setting based off the description lol
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Will there be special reactions if PC and heir look identical?
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