The Wayhaven Chronicles: Book One (WIP)

Meh, of course they’re business wear for me, so that makes me less inclined to wear them during my time off. Also there’s not that many colours (readily) available for guys. Particularly for business we’re mostly restricted to shades of blue, gray and charcoal. :unamused:

Although the Hunger Games (movie) stylists did a great job, imho with Peeta’s/Josh Hutcherson’s costumes whenever he wore a suit in those movies. But those were deliberately designed to deviate from our boring, real-world conventions of “acceptable” men’s fashion.




and my favourites



The one on the right.

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Let’s not turn this thread into another fashion thread like the Witches thread was.

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I was deciding between replaying Lady’s Choice or checking out the choice of games forum, and I stumbled across your story- I am SO excited. I love the writing and story so far, and I am very excited for the love triangle angst :wink: Looking forward to reading more :smiley:

/raises hand/ @Seraphinite, I have a question! I shot Adam in the second chapter, but chapter three seems to start off later that same day. I’m trying to figure out if Adam has regenerative abilities or if it’s just a continuity error that his shoulder seems to be fine now. :thinking: I’m also wondering if I wouldn’t be able to recognize him as the man I’d shot. If anything, his silhouette should be recognizable, no?

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I just played through Chapter 3, and I am starting to enjoy it more and more. I have made my MC a bit of a workaholic and kinda closed off, but happy to flirt as part of friendly banter. It was very interesting to watch her clash with Adam. I really liked Nate in this chapter, too. He seems like the diplomat–with a bit of a dark side, perhaps? Farah was fun, although I will need some time to get used to Morgan because she seems a bit sour (read: emo) to me at the moment. There was a part that seemed to repeat itself twice, but it might’ve also just been that I missed on the button the first time. I’ll have to play through again to see if it’s the case. :slight_smile:

He’s a Vamp, in most stories they usually have an extraordinary ability to regenerate, though the actual speed of this seems variable, if it is this quick either Wayhaven is on the high end of the fictional Vamp scale or Adam is a very powerful vampire. Good one though about the silhouette, someone like Adam should be very recognizable.

Fair enough, though black-tie for men is a bit of a sore spot for me. I get that those things are exiting, fashion wise, for girls and women, but for us men, not so much, imho.
For me the only differences between my catering job in highschool and college and attending some of them as a guest now are a jacket, a cumberbund and an overpriced watch. :unamused:

True, but I don’t know why he would’ve made such a big fuss over his shoulder if he was just gonna heal that fast. :thinking: Unless he’s just making a fuss over the fact he got shot by a human. In which case, I still figure he’d have some kind of reaction to my shooting him. :joy:

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Would both ways work with all ROs, or would a certain way work, or at least be more effective, depending on who you’re flirting with?

@Lithophene Even if vampires regenerate, the pain is still just as strong until they do so, that could be a reason. Besides that it seemed they really doubted the MC would shoot, even challenged in a way, not to menttion the teasing from the other vampire.

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Found a small bug:

I’m confused as to how that spoiled anything? I purposely kept my comment rather vague😅

Ah! The update is great haha, I love how each character has so much personality!

Glad I asked! Tried it twice before and once more now. It still only takes me as far as that😞 I am playing on mobile (don’t know if that would affect anything). Right after the reveal I’m taken to the play options page (“Play Again,” “Share,” etc.).

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Loved the update, and i loved the contrasting charachters. Adam could certainly stand to loosen up justa little, but hey a little conflict isn’t bad. Nate seems like a huge teddy bear, quite possibly in need of a hug (plus I’m a huge sucker for a tall softie :wink:). Felix is interesting I’ve gotta give him props for his forwardness, i feel like the mom’ll appreciate it less than her son though. As for Mason i honestly have no idea but I’m definitely intrigued, i also imagine him as having a resting bitch face. I’m excited to get to know each beyond their surface personalities. Keep up the good work :blush:.
(P.S i love that there’s love triangle potential.)

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Just played the démo for the fight time and I have to say I am looking forward to the complete game.

Will other creatures appear in the story?
Will we be able to become one of these creatures?

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I have so much fun with the love triangle trope when it’s done right and you’re definitely making it really interesting and entertaining so far :smile:

Will we be able to play with it a lot? Like have genuine interest in one but be leading the other on? If we try to romance both will that anger them when they find out? :joy:

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Thank you!! Did this and had no issue😄

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Can’t stop…hitting…sarcastic responses. Mason is going to be so much fun to annoy. I’m loving this so much.

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It’s so difficult to not be sarcastic when the option is offered😂

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