@MahatmaDagon It looks like the MC’s sword is meant to be held with two hands like Sielcner’s sword so I’m not sure how realistic (depending on its weight) it is to hold it in one hand for very long (probably doable but not for long). Will Sielcner wear the Star Crown if he has it?
For the family tree, maybe add some spacing between the MC’s mother and her royal ancestor since multiple generations have passed. There is probably some format for that but I’m guessing maybe dotted lines?
I do think there should be some kind of hint in the opening conversations from Vradnir or Jenneth or Meybuk that MCs should actually start recruiting troops. If new players wait to start recruiting until it is obvious that they will be invaded, then by then they may not be able to recruit enough anyway.
It looks like male MCs (but not female MCs) still need social > 60 to marry Jenneth. I don’t know what last things you intend to add into the game but I hope you choose to not lock out an entire RO based on a stat check for only one gender.
I admit I am also still hoping that female MCs who have a child with Lodka can propose to him. I’ve been playing a lot of Crusader Kings 2 lately and gavelkind succession where one child inherits one realm and another child inherits the other seems like an obvious way to allow Lodka and the MC to marry. Granted, it can lead to siblings at each other’s throats with claims to each other’s territory, but at least their parents will be happy 
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It looks like event 34 (produce an heir event) does not yet take into account the relationship between the MC and the MC’s spouse.
If a male MC tells Wyneva on the wedding night that it will be a political marriage, 2 of the 3 responses lead immediately to her talking about the dead. It seems like those responses should have led to something else. Also it would be nice to have the option to give the reason of not wanting to have sex with someone the MC does not love the same as that choice was present in Hereya’s wedding night. Wyneva at least would probably not mind that. The only current option to decline Wyneva requires the MC to claim to not be interested in women at all which is then followed by the MC being able to choose to change his mind.
Here are some typos and bugs I noticed in the latest version.
“Well, I have to admit that I am still trouble by what you said to me during our wedding night, but this… this isn’t about that.”
It should be troubled.
During Danna’s date night:
*if spouseRelation >= 0
Your spouse wears a long sleeved ${color} tunic with golden ornamented bands and a white robe, fastened around her waist. She appears stoic, politely waiting for you to take the lead.
This inequality is pointed the wrong way. It should be if spouseRelation < 0.
*hide_reuse #"Does everyone in your family have the same initials?"
*if (spouseRelation >= 0)
"It has been an old tradition of House Dullac. 'A chain that links us all together in greatness', my grandfather used to say. But you need not adhere to it; our child will only inherit your surname, and you can name it differently."
*if (spouseRelation >= 0)
"It has been an old tradition of House Dullac. 'A chain that links us all together in greatness', my grandfather used to say."
One of those inequalities is probably pointing the wrong way and should be *if (spouseRelation < 0).
*label killMyself
You rise from your seat and hold your ${weaponName} with both hands. The guards keep the old man down, but he offers no resistance. Indeed, he even appears releaved.
It should be relieved.
*label seizeItAll
*set unrest + 1
*set treasury + 410
By the end of it, a total of ₳410 will be added to your treasury. Geduin's descendants might try to contest your decision in the future, but there isn't much they can do against someone of noble birth.
*goto_scene byebye
*label seizeModest
*set treasury + 75
A total of ₳75 is added to your Treasury, and you close the court for the day, while Geduin's descendants start the preparations for his burial.
*goto_scene byebye
*label leaveItAll
*set unrest + 1
*set templeRelation + 1
While Geduin's descendants are certainly saddened by his death, they also understand that it was what the old man wanted, and manage to find their peace with the way you handled the situation.
His oldest son in particular is very thankful, and makes a huge donation to the Temple in your name.
*goto_scene byebye
It seems like leaving the entire inheritance to the descendants should if anything lower instead of raise unrest.
*Label refuseFealty
Before anything else happens, ou notice a hissing sound in the distance, coming from beyond the balcony. Then there is this sudden and loud noise, which disturbs all lords and ladies, making them all turn to it.
It should be you.