@edelclere @Zenobrighter I haven’t looked into this fully yet but maybe there is a problem with the png files. when you choose your pronouns it would take you to the “prologue.png” and when you end the prologue it would go to “chapterone.png”.
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chapter one is also written.
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sadly, I can’t seem to solve the “too much recursion” problem yet! this will probably take longer than me working on it today (I am so new to coding), however, the full tone indicators will be out along with a toggle to hide them. + some minor misspellings, bugs will be fixed on this day.
FOR THOSE WHO ARE HAVING DEMO ISSUES: use other browsers other than Firefox (like Chrome); but if you can’t, Firefox’s incognito mode works fine for some reason.
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OK read it in my mobiles built in browser, hum even more intrigued now, I chose the best friend to be female, but their surname seemed to switch between Archer and another name Kennarde’s, also a couple of times the gender changed but couldn’t tell if it was referring to the MC or Korina?
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Hi, thanks for playing and I am glad you liked it! Kennarde is the medical clinic’s name MC was going to. It shouldn’t be possible to be K’s surname, but could you give me some examples if that’s the case? And where did you notice the gender change?
OK reread it must have been a bit more tired as didn’t see the wrong pronouns this time, also got confused as my MC looked for the address of their friend and the clinic name was mentioned in the same paragph.
OK reading again did find the pronoun error just after we get to their house and hug (used the flirt crush option)
“I’m glad to see you again too,” he tells you, which coaxes a faint smile out of you. “You look great.”
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I really loved this demo, the story is very interesting and I liked the characters.
May I ask you to give a few more details regarding the poly route?
I did find a few typos and inconsistencies:
Summary
I think it should be “They let you go home”
Here I think that is repetitive, you could simply use the “You thought there would be a …” or “You expected to see a …”
Her instead of her’s
Give instead of gave I think
She instead og He for me. And there should be a space there
The part in red is repeated with a diferent pronoun that in my case is the wrong one.
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Thank you so much for these! I really appreciate them. Tomorrow, I will get them fixed and yes, you can ask about the poly route but just to be clear: I’d love to do it, but it’s not confirmed yet.
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thanks, I will fix it tomorrow!
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Thats totally fine, the fact that you want to do is already prety great. If you end up doing it do you have any idea if it will be a closed triad or which characters will the route be with?
And thank you for taking the time to share your story with us!
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Yep, two characters and MC. I would love to share who will the route be with but I don’t feel comfortable disclosing it yet because it’s just an idea.
There will be a point when one character of the poly route does something that might break the other person’s, or MC’s, trust. And I’m not sure they could work it out with a conversation.
In short, because of plot reasons it’s really uncertain, however not 100% impossible. When we get to the point of locking in the romance, I’ll decide wether doing it or not.
Thanks so much for being this understanding! <3
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replying to this after a random thought I had: I think I might be able to solve it but with a different pair of characters on the long run
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do you play as a god
This looks very interesting. I can’t wait to see its development. Good luck author!
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no, but you can become one later on!
thank you so much! <3
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TVS UPDATE — 09/30/2021
i don’t think anyone cares but aaaa i am so happy i could finally write today guys! we are getting closer to the update! i plan to finish the raw draft this weekend, polish it, do some coding (i found some bugs in the current demo too) and we are hopefully ready to go <3
the plot hole i was talking about is somewhat solved so i can continue on writing but my friend will be helping me with it tomorrow. i don’t have a set date when it will be ready since i literally have zero energy when i come home but hopefully, i can announce one soon. this will be a shorter addition to the demo, but (in my opinion) an interesting one!
have a wonderful week, everyone! <3
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That’s great! I can’t wait to see it. I’m really happy for you.
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I think you put the wrong month. Sorry for being a pain about it. Was going to crack a joke about timetravel but ultimately decided not to. You may not of noticed that you made the mistake. 07 is July. 09 is September.
Was also just wondering why The Liar can only have a romance with female and non-binary and not male MC? The other characters can be romanced by any MC, why not her also?