The Phoenix (WIP) - DEMO OUT [13/08/23]!

it’ll be a mix between choices depending on stats and, in later matches, some luck :slight_smile: wanted to represent how in taekwondo some matches are more random and even though you make the right choices, it may just not be your day!

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haha sounds like another fun idea … maybe after this one is wrapped up :smiling_face_with_tear:

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But… but…

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oooh this was very fun, I liked it a lot! I can’t decide which of the characters I like most right now, they all seem so interesting!

couple of small typos I found
  • when pulling the ti out it says “od” instead of “of”

and then the following are some pronoun errors, I had alex as a woman

  • “after she left on seen the first time you texted him”

  • “Sure, it would be nice if she he could text you instead of emailing.”

  • “Don’t worry, it’s easy to forget,” you reassure him, “But yes.”


super super fun! I was playing a stoic character and when Jamie asked us a question I was torn between the more obvious in character option and a more open one. I tried both, but the bit about “having the perfect joke” on the stoic one was SO perfect! I love it

also I saw you were asking about the nickname Jamie calls you, I got Regina George lolol

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thanks for letting me know, all those typos/errors should be fixed now! super glad you noticed that bit of flavour text, tried my best to add as much as possible :smiley: thank you for reading and enjoying <3

regina george is my favourite possible jamie nickname haha

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Will there be a cheat mode in a future update?

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didn’t have one planned, but if its something people want i can add one! however, losing doesn’t mean end game. i have other things planned if your mc is eliminated early on!!

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Does this mean that if we lose we get to become a drunken grumpy fighter who is willing to teach anybody that has potential? Lol

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maybe :zipper_mouth_face::zipper_mouth_face: only time will tell haha

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This caught my eye on Tumblr, it looks amazing! I’ve played the demo and I’m really interested in the story so far. It ended in a great place too. Can’t wait to see what’s next!

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thank you so much for reading and enjoying!!! means a lot <33

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small update: looking to have chapter 1 done and up by the end of august/start of september!

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It warms my heart to be reminded my country’s national sport has gotten pretty big outside the peninsula.
-big enough for someone to write a IF game about it

I’ll keep an eye out for future updates!

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I push it up so other people can read this amazing IF :smiley:

It was moved to itch*io

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oh okay, thank you for the info :smiley:

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