I was planning on closing the poll at 12 PM CST (my time zone) tomorrow but looks like the request for Chapter Two and new stat charts are overwhelming the pirate WIP, so I guess Chapter Two wins!
On a DBZ related note, Broly just has been confirmed to be the villian of the new Dragon Ball Super movie with a redesigned look. I damn near had a heart attack when I found out and there may or may not be tears of joy being shed on my part. Maaaaaybe.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAH oh gosh.
Alright, the stat charts are now in the code! So far, Iām loving the new look of it so hopefully youāll like it as well but it is not updated yet. I was considering adding the lore of your MCās alien race in the story eventually after reaching a certain point since it would be neat to expand on the universeās history.
And to give this story more of an anime feel, I also decided to add āstory arcsā like how some of the anime has them like Dragon Ball Z has the āFrieza Sagaā, Naruto with āPainās Assault Arcā and One Pieceās āParamount War Arcā, so this storyās first āstory arcā will be called Genesis as discussed a while back. Itās hard to say at this point just how many sagas there will be in The Outsider but most likely 3-7?
cant wait for these arcs man.
Iām not sure how to add them. But honestly Iād probably just add āGenesis Sagaā at the beginning of each chapter title that is in the correct time for the story arc. Then Iāll have to come up with a new name for the next arc.
yeah that pretty much how it works.
The update has been delayed for who knows how long since I am about to get at least 3 or 4 teeth pulled out by tomorrow or Wednesday. It is likely that I will be gone from the forum for a bit.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
wish you the best of luck.
Ah, I know that feeling!
I had to get eight teeth pulled out about three years ago and oof.
That first week was rough, I wonāt lie, but due to the miracle of modern medicine, so long as you take your antibiotics, swish your gums with warm saltwater, and follow all the instructions your dentist gives, youāll actually feel fine within a few days.
I wish you a speedy recovery nonetheless. Get well soon, @MichaelCrank!
sigh Worst part about tooth pain in my current situation is that no one is absolutely available for another 5 and half hours until Iām able to walk in. And apparently itās illegal for a doctor to pull a tooth out in an emergency room.
I have tried ice packs, pain medicine, tooth relief gel, warm saltwater but nothing has worked so far so the only option left is to wait until I get to my appointment.
Well the dentist was a no go. Couldnāt set up an appointment in time but I did get some pain medication from a doctor.
Chapter Two will come whenever I do sober up because this medication is really messing me up.
teeth probleme are always a pain in the ass
So beautiful. Honestly I might copy a bit of the final fight between Broly and Goku in this movie if it is dope as my expectations for it.
Canāt wait to see the movie
Yup, i saw it a while ago, iām really hyped now XD
Also it would be cool if we could have an option be really buff and all like Goku or even Broly, i like when my characters look as powerfull as they are because the ālook weak but is strongā is now pretty much the norm instead of a subversion
I probably would have to move the final fight to a different planet due to the massive power level between Lord Kann and the Goku or Broly transformation could easily crack Earth in multiple pieces.
I have long considered doing levels of the super transformation like SSJ1, SSJ2 and LSSJ. Iād probably have one or two characters knowing the first level of the transformation and think that this is their peak while thereās a new level out there theyāre not aware of.
so kinda like the android saga with SSJ2.
Maybe but Iād have to make this story into a series so I could write the plot that I want.
Sound fun, itās pretty rare to see DB inspired stuff (cough rip off cough) that arenāt big franchise like One Piece or Naruto
combined with the comics element, it can end up being something pretty cool IMO