The New Lord (WIP)-Minor update July 11 See Post 95/95



Aaah, yes. Sapphira’s hidden twin Sappira. She’s well known for her yelling out her own voice.


If you want to know the song that Angel was dancing to…this is what I was listening to to while writing their portion::


I imagine a beautiful dance


I’m no ballerina, so I didn’t do the dance justice. But the song does allow the reader have some creative liberties.


I actually meant after listening to that I imagined a beautiful dance for angel.
Though my favorite is Camille


Currently everyone loves Camille


I can actually see why


The feel when you sabotage your characters


What do mean? (20 characters)


I looked back at Bryn’s introduction and I feel that I made him too unlikeable?


Nah, he is fun to be around


Yeah. And there is only one way to go after hitting rock bottom, right?


Under rock bottom of course.


Of course. It’ll be so terrible even Satan, himself, would create 50 new layers just for my characterizations.


I made some minor changes in chapter 2 and 3. Chapter 4 is almost completed and the Prologue and first chapter will be tweaked up as well. Sorry for the long wait.