The New Lord (WIP)-Minor update July 11 See Post 95/95

gender-choice

#86

Aaah, yes. Sapphira’s hidden twin Sappira. She’s well known for her yelling out her own voice.


#87

If you want to know the song that Angel was dancing to…this is what I was listening to to while writing their portion::https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FosDCk73_LI


#88

I imagine a beautiful dance


#89

I’m no ballerina, so I didn’t do the dance justice. But the song does allow the reader have some creative liberties.


#90

I actually meant after listening to that I imagined a beautiful dance for angel.
Though my favorite is Camille


#91

Currently everyone loves Camille


#92

I can actually see why


#94

The feel when you sabotage your characters


#95

Eh?
What do mean? (20 characters)


#96

I looked back at Bryn’s introduction and I feel that I made him too unlikeable?


#97

Nah, he is fun to be around


#98

Yeah. And there is only one way to go after hitting rock bottom, right?


#99

Under rock bottom of course.


#100

Of course. It’ll be so terrible even Satan, himself, would create 50 new layers just for my characterizations.


#101

I made some minor changes in chapter 2 and 3. Chapter 4 is almost completed and the Prologue and first chapter will be tweaked up as well. Sorry for the long wait.