The New Lord (WIP)-Minor update July 11 See Post 95/95

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#86

Aaah, yes. Sapphira’s hidden twin Sappira. She’s well known for her yelling out her own voice.

#87

If you want to know the song that Angel was dancing to…this is what I was listening to to while writing their portion::https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FosDCk73_LI

#88

I imagine a beautiful dance

#89

I’m no ballerina, so I didn’t do the dance justice. But the song does allow the reader have some creative liberties.

#90

I actually meant after listening to that I imagined a beautiful dance for angel.
Though my favorite is Camille

#91

Currently everyone loves Camille

#92

I can actually see why

#94

The feel when you sabotage your characters

#95

Eh?
What do mean? (20 characters)

#96

I looked back at Bryn’s introduction and I feel that I made him too unlikeable?

#97

Nah, he is fun to be around

#98

Yeah. And there is only one way to go after hitting rock bottom, right?

#99

Under rock bottom of course.

#100

Of course. It’ll be so terrible even Satan, himself, would create 50 new layers just for my characterizations.

#101

I made some minor changes in chapter 2 and 3. Chapter 4 is almost completed and the Prologue and first chapter will be tweaked up as well. Sorry for the long wait.