Well now, that was an awesome experience!
I must admit I was conflicted if I should play this or not. It was like, nothing made me think I NEED to try it, but at the same time I was intrigued. I’m so so glad I did!
I like the overall tone of the story, and well, the characters are really cool. I wish it had a male werewolf avaible for romance though, but oh well, it’s not that big of an issue I guess, since I really REALLY love Elian (I only romance male characters). I can’t wait to know what he is.
I guess I should point out some errors or bugs I wound before I continue gushing 
Keep in mind I won’t do a lot of spelling and grammatical corrections cause English isn’t my language so yeah - I can pick up on some things but…
Oh well, here I go:
- In the archive, under common demons, the sentence “While the host unable to take control of their body, their mind, settling into a meditative or ‘sleeping’ state, their body is still in need of maintenance.” confuses me a bit, though I understand the meaning.
And in the same entry “It is not known if a child conceived by a possessed demon and an average human is in any way different than other human children.”. It should be “concieved by a possessed human and an average human” or “concieved by a demon possessing a human and an average human”, right?
- I think the category “fractions” should be “factions”?
- I found a HUGE bug and I’m not even sure how to describe it. It won’t carry to the final game anyway, but it was really annnoying. Since the demo allows for saving, I was doing that in order to try various options and see their consequences on stats and relationships. I was at the part when you discuss Elian with Bas, and I saved before a choice, picked it, checked the relationships menu, and then clicked load because I wasn’t sure if something was affected and wanted to recheck the relationship values before doing that choice. But since I was on the relationships screen when I clicked “load”, the game started to consider the stat screen as the game screen. Basically, if I click “show stats” I go to the stats. And if I click “return to the game”, it loads the stats screen again. So no matter how many time I click on the button, I go back to the stats screen and can’t proceed with the game.
As I said, I probably missed various errors - that’s what I wrote down in my notes while playing. I didn’t check the entire archive, mind, because I was too lazy.
I have to say it made me laugh when I checked the relationships page very early on, and it only said “The Demon doesn’t care about you.” - no shit XD
It’s especially funny when there’s only the demon. Once actual relationship bars are added, it looks more “normal”.
Oh, and I’d like to thank you for adding shy romance options - I hate to have my characters openly flirt. And I’m happy that Bas actually openly flirts - I have mentionned that on topics about the matter, but it always bothers me when the love interests are only interested in the MC if the player made some choices to initiate that. I like it when some of the LIs are actually interested on their own. Makes it more natural. Though I still like Elian way more so yeah, sorry Bas…
Also, this may seem a little weird, but I do have a very strong reaction to amnesia. Like, plot revolving around amnesia make me really unconfortable - forgetting is something that scares me a lot. So well, that makes the story extra terrifying, but at the same time, you write in a way that makes it interesting without it bothering or distracting me. But I guess I would like the game to have a trigger warning about amnesia anyway? Like I said, it didn’t truly bother me, the way it is presented, but it’s always good to have that. I mean, I DID know about it since I read the story in the original post, so no issue, but I don’t always do since I tend to go into stories blind.
Anyway, great game so far, and again, Elian is so awesome. Can’t wait fort he next updates - I’m so hyped now.
I saw that yesterday and thought something was off but didn’t follow up on it! Damn, thanks for pointing it out! And that’s my friends is why you keep a copy of your finished chapters around x.x
