The Golden Chronicles: Book 1 [WIP] (+95,000 words)┃(UPDATE! 0.3)

Hmm, I don’t seem to see any error. Can you tell me which part it is?

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It isn’t an error, but rather the way its worded.

The begging where it says obey. It can be taken very poorly to readers. It would be better to do something like I accept this quest or something of that nature.

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I know it has a synopsis but can someone tell me more about the game please

Ooh- fascinating! I’ll be sure to pair her up with one of my ocs :>

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honestly speaking, id prefer if you kept it gender locked and the original story planned intact. not a great decision business wise, and if you make it you can make it work, you probably should. but trying to cater to everyone usually leads to the narrative getting diluted and generic. capturing a niche and doing it well, like the infinity series did, well that’d be swell.

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Yo bro why is this game so underated

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