Just read the prologue shit is looking good, cant wait for more
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Keep up the good work
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It’s a bit early to really judge or give much feedback but I like the concept at least.
A small feature I like is when stats have a little text describing how good you are at each stat. Like at 1 in strength, there’s a little text about how you’re really weak in that aspect but at 10 there’s a little text that say you can strangle a bull barehanded.
Also will there be poly?
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Yep, right now I have one poly in mind. Maybe two if I can manage it.
And the stats are still not fully flash out yet, but I added a little text for each for now.
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Love the premise and how its executed so far.
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Absolutely love the update, but I noticed a typo I think. I picked male for the ro choices and chose straight as my sexuality. Also mc is female. Not sure if that info will help or not to find typo. But anyways during Fenris’ fight it kept calling them a she instead of he. Hope this helps.
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Ughh I don’t like Selena haha. Taking away our sibling and then just saying to trust her. We can’t do anything right now but at least we can threaten her. Small victory xd
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Hmmm, is there a way to get through the first Arena with Raina and Vincent intact? Great story and wonderful characters, I’m overprotective over lil Artie 
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@Miraskel Oh, I found it and fixed, ty!
@Queen_Zelda Well… at first I was planning on them both dying actually, but after writing them I decided to let you chose one to live. I’ll think in the future on having one way to let both survive if the work is not insane.
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It’s a shame that I can’t save them both. I even managed to get them reached 4 for them to survive and I can only save one person.