Just read the prologue shit is looking good, cant wait for more
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Keep up the good work
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It’s a bit early to really judge or give much feedback but I like the concept at least.
A small feature I like is when stats have a little text describing how good you are at each stat. Like at 1 in strength, there’s a little text about how you’re really weak in that aspect but at 10 there’s a little text that say you can strangle a bull barehanded.
Also will there be poly?
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Yep, right now I have one poly in mind. Maybe two if I can manage it.
And the stats are still not fully flash out yet, but I added a little text for each for now.
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Love the premise and how its executed so far.
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Absolutely love the update, but I noticed a typo I think. I picked male for the ro choices and chose straight as my sexuality. Also mc is female. Not sure if that info will help or not to find typo. But anyways during Fenris’ fight it kept calling them a she instead of he. Hope this helps.
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Ughh I don’t like Selena haha. Taking away our sibling and then just saying to trust her. We can’t do anything right now but at least we can threaten her. Small victory xd
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Hmmm, is there a way to get through the first Arena with Raina and Vincent intact? Great story and wonderful characters, I’m overprotective over lil Artie 
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@Miraskel Oh, I found it and fixed, ty!
@Queen_Zelda Well… at first I was planning on them both dying actually, but after writing them I decided to let you chose one to live. I’ll think in the future on having one way to let both survive if the work is not insane.
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It’s a shame that I can’t save them both. I even managed to get them reached 4 for them to survive and I can only save one person.
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As someone who practices sword fighting and did a few wooden swords, I can’t imagine a wooden sword (especially as small as they used to be in ancient rome) to be considered heavy for a 16 years old. Even for a girl it won’t be heavy enough to drop it as soon as taken (first training with Titus)
Stopped there for now to leave this comment. So far the story is good and pleasing.
Would like to help Claude / Claudia when they are beaten by guards while being chained at the market
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Oooooo update, might be time for a new review
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I loved you’re writing! It’s such a unique idea, I cant wait to see what you turn this story into
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Is it possible to romance multiple ROs, or are we stuck with only a single one? Cause it would honestly be nice if we can build a relationship with a couple of them at the same time.
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Is there any way to save Vincent or keep him alive?
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My understanding at the moment one of them is allways dying cant save both.
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I would propose MC wounded if trying to save both, first battle scar probably…
Unfortunatly were not in the fight no way to save them as a result at least in that way.
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Both of them died though
Edit: I didn’t spar with Raina during the 3 year time skip. Tried again, trained with her once and she survived. What about Vincent? How does one save him?
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I trained with raina year one and vincent year two then claude year three. Its how i got raina to survive. Yet i suspect it also has something to do with how we approach them both in conversation but havent played enough to find out the nuances between them. I just remeber that at present we were told that cant save both so there is a way to save one of them.
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