Considering you haven’t seen him with his previous lovers (unless you’ve read the POV scene in my patreon), you have no idea how he treats them. Assuming he doesn’t treat them well is completely false. They’re friends of his, who he would treat very similarly because that’s who he is.
Correct. So perhaps save your comments until then.
I just did a search for that phrasing and literally found zero instances. I’ll keep an eye out but at this point I’m trying to move forward with the game. I’ll be going over the first few chapters again once I finish the full draft.
I know it’s not the exact phrasing, I had to look something else up in order to continue that comment. But all the soul stirring and rattling in your soul is what I’m trying to get at. As a reader, there’s a lot of it in there. And I know it isn’t really apparent when you write, I have trouble with repetitively using words and phrases as well and not even noticing it until I go back after a long break or someone else points it out to me. Just please be aware.
When you give us incredible RO’s and hot poly romances, but I fall in love with the super shady, non-romanceable enchantress who definitely wants the worst for our kingdom instead:
I can’t stop fawning over Collin and Dorian. They are both so princely, kind and loving. I imagine that both had/have big problems in their life (we know this about Collin, not sure about Dorian, but because of his Fae blood most people don’t look at him too favourably) still they are positive, brave, sweet and so kind to their friends, family (Collin to his sisters and baby brother) and to the staff (to us.) I love all the RO’s, but I simply adore Collin and Dorian amazingly well done.
Thank you! I’m so glad you’re enjoying them. I love these characters.
I just finished a first editing pass through chapter four, so that will be up for Patreon members soon! It’s over 29,000 words full of action and plot twists. I can’t wait to share it with you! But first, sleep, then playtesting.
This chapter is 30,000 words and is the turning point for the story, full of action and plot twists and danger. It starts with a visit to the Eternal Library and only gets more intense from there.
This is really where the story gets going. Everything up until now has been setting the stage for what happens in chapter four. Yes, the first three chapters are important, establishing relationships and fleshing out the MC’s personality, but chapter four is where everything changes for the kingdom of Minare and so much more is revealed!
This addition to the demo will be released in a month for the public. For those of you who love the story and have the funds to support me via Patreon, I appreciate it so much! Your support helps me take care of my family in a world that gets increasingly more expensive, and rewards me as an artist for writing the story of my heart. This means the world to me, as does the encouragement many of you have expressed here in the forum, so thank you!!! I hope you can feel my gratitude! Your interest in this story helps me keep going.
Played it through and love it! I’m not much into stats, I play IF games for enjoyment, and played my MC as a gentle, forgiving person who is not into violence as such, but does have a few moments where revenge would be sweet. I loved your previous two games, and this is shaping up to be the best of the series! I still have several routes to play, but perhaps I should replay the others as well, something to do during the heatwaves we keep having and its too hot to move around!
Yay! I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed it! What a nice comment to wake up to. Thank you!
I’m not much into stats either, honestly. They’re helpful for some things, but I’ve been writing this story with far less focus on stats than my other games. There are, so far, only two points where a choice tests your stats in a pass or fail situation, and while failure has consequences they are remedied as the game goes on — I’m a merciful game master. All the rest of the stat tests are purely for flavor text so the story reflects your character’s choices. There are definitely IF novels where stats are important to the MC’s success in the game, but this is not one of them. I’d rather just tell the story than make players stress about stat levels.
Thank you so much for saying this and for all your encouragement! I’ve been working on this story off and on for six years, and though I love TMP and Ink, this one has a special place in my heart.
Meanwhile in Canada, I’m feeding the wood stove and hoping it will warm up enough that I can take my dog for a decently long walk without her paws freezing. I hope you get a cool breeze and some relief from the heat. Thanks for taking time to play and for leaving such a lovely comment!
amazingly well done.
All the rest of the stat tests are purely for flavor text so the story reflects your character’s choices. There are definitely IF novels where stats are important to the MC’s success in the game, but this is not one of them. 
I’d rather just tell the story than make players stress about stat levels.
I hope you get a cool breeze and some relief from the heat. Thanks for taking time to play and for leaving such a lovely comment!