This seems really, really interesting. I’m liking the theme so far, even if it’s kinda limited :3 On a secondary note, if you need help with spell checking and corrections, then you’re more than welcome to hit me up. I’d gladly provide my help, if it somehow makes the process of making the game any easier for you 
No hard feelings if you don’t want/need the help, just figured I’d offer it anyway, since I know a lot of hard work goes into the process of making these games :3
Thanks! Im actually holding off on major grammar and spell checking for when I hit beta and alpha testing! I plan to get all those quirks fixed once that happens so if your still down for it by all means let me know when the time comes!
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I’ll keep an eye out for when you get that far, because I’d gladly help if I can :3 It’s inspirational to share your work like you do, and since I don’t have the artistic talent to make a novel myself, I’m just glad to help wherever I can if that makes sense? :3
Totally! Im one of those people that will completely forget how certai words are spelled or what punctuation is needed so I appreciate all of that! A bit depressing considering both my parents are teachers but what can you do.
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Hey nothing wrong with that. I’m not a native English speaker, but I’d consider myself pretty good at it. Even then, I suck royal bum in my native language, and often forget words only remembering the English version of it 
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Gotta love it when writers block is kicking your butt! I’m still alive and fighting with the update! I’m more active on the tumblr as well
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Also if anyone is interested a fun bit of insanity just occurred on the tumblr involving the characters and hunger games give it a look
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I am glad your still here 
Thanks!
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An update will happen by the end of the month!
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You’ve got a very interesting premise here, I’m excited to read more!
On another note, this is just a suggestion but when it comes to choices you might want to put spoken choices in quotation marks. This’ll make them more distinguished in situations where you can either speak or act, and will help differentiate spoken choices from internal thought choices. Anyways, it’s up to you on whether you’d want to use this, but I just thought I’d share my two cents. 
Good luck on the next update, you’re doing great!
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I really love this premise. I’m a sucker for the ‘Seven Deadly Sins’ trope in media!
Looking forward to read more of this/see where this goes and meet the rest of the characters and ROs! I’m already enjoying the ones that did appear so far!
I don’t know what else to say that hasn’t been said already but…keep up the good work! I already have a eye on this one 
! Take care and good luck!
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Thanks for the tip! I appreciate feedback and comments like that and I’ll definitely think about it!
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Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy what’s to come and look forward to the update by the end of the month!
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Oh shit! Your the evermore author! I actually follow your blog on my personal tumblr! I love the demo so far! Thanks for checking out my game!
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Update will be live tomorrow evening!
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Small update but im super proud of it! It took a lot of coding to figure out enjoy!
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I’m happy for you
Thank you! Hope you enjoyed!
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Still alive! Block is kicking my but again but I’m getting through it as best I can!
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