The last paragraph should be “Honestly, who the hell knows at this point, but yeah I’m down. Let’s do this”
Also I have a bit of a complaint. I’m trying to make make character like blunt, stoic, sarcastic and a pessimist. In other words a bit of an asshole and smart-ass, but our character is already so charismatic and dependent towards everyone. This is just a suggestion but if you can, try to make it so that there’s like auto responses based on your personality, there are some games that do it that way and makes things easier in my opinion
I appreciate feedback. And I have been incorporating that, it’s called flavor text. I incorporate in spots I feel suit best. And while things might seem easier to you they in fact are not on a coding aspect. It is a lot harder with all the different variables. Like I mentioned I incorporate it in spots I feel it fits best. Hope you enjoy what is to come!
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I think that the first time we met Aria we’re either overlly ofencive or just stoic?silent? And it took me away from the book a little bc at most I would be suspicious or mistrustful, maybe I (in the character position) would even try and hide my felings being a little more charming to get some information as to “how she got so close and why” but I guess it made me a little unconfy to be so snapy and sarcastic to some shady lady who may or may not sell some organs on the side and being “stoic” is just weird bc I prefer to play as a responsive character.
For the grammar errors I would recommend using gramarly and I think google docs helps too found some but I’m too lazy now
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Don’t know why sometimes my character says he’s gay while others it’s almost like something was cut out before he tries to speak even tho it’s the same character with the same choices (only difference is his romantic? companions)
mc is weirdly unconcerned abt causing the end of the world??
Why did Mc not react at all at seeing the people he has visions for who knows how long rigth in front of him?
and don’t ask me why but I kinda feel bad for Azazel must be bc he was so concerned for Azra just to be turned down like that
poor chap (or not who knows)
I’m not sure when the game ends or if it’s just my internet being slow so it would be better to make a warning abt it on the last page (mine was forever loading in chap 3)
Small update for you guys, first bit of chapter 3 and some minor edits to the rest. I have also made bisexual male mc’s able to romance aster and fenrir.
For people that check the forum small update life wise things have been a bit hectic I keep more active on the tumblr game is still being worked on though so for more updates be sure to check that out.
Major update. I have decided to move my game over to twine instead of using choicescript. after taking a bit of time to figure things out i figured twine works a bit more for what i want to do. Feel free to check the tumblr out for more info and the new demo https://sevensdeadly.tumblr.com/
and thank you everyone! Youll still probably see me lurking around the forums though there are just to many great games to play. With that ill wait for a mod to close this thread!
must be bc he was so concerned for Azra just to be turned down like that