Synopsis: You were found in a destroyed home. Blood all around you. You have no memory of how you got there. The only thing you know is your life as you used to know it is completely gone. Now they are running tests on you and talking about your ‘potential’. Choose who to trust and who to betray. Can you even trust your own mind? Can you even return to your old life?
Author Note: Hello!
I am a long time reader, first time writer for IF stories and currently have my first demo for my WIP Red Breaths so please be willing to give constructive feedback!
Update Log:
Update One: Added to Chapter One bringing the total to about 9k words. Let me know what you guys think! Also improved the stats screen a bit and gave the option for character customization.
Update Two: Finished Chapter One bringing the total words to 22.5k words. Added a lot more coding to make the play through a little more dynamic. Enjoy!
Content Warning: Blood, Gore, Mental Trauma. If any readers think of any others I should add, let me know.
No worrys and it works now now as to what content we currently can see my intrest is peaked so will follow your progress as I can and how the implied different aspects come together.
What i can say is I have a feeling despite lack of memories im going to be on there bad side real soon lol
Playing again and noticed that when first at the facility if we choose to wait but dont do the other options it treats it as having done all the options. So would suggest creating a variation here or for the others in someway if something isn’t done. Or if you decide to not create varation to give a small note with the wait option that basically tells readers selecting it will treat all the options having been done.
Just a food for thought
Playing a little further along boticed the continuation at some point might consider removing the end there message and connect the two parts smoothly.
Thank you for the advice. I am trying to figure out how to make an if statement so that option is always the last option that is available. Will have to do more research to allow that .
As for the end message forgot to remove that. Thank you for bringing it to my attention!
If you guys give the WIP a read, let me know how the combat fight flowed. Its my first time trying to write something like that so any feedback or criticism is welcome!
now as to what content we currently can see my intrest is peaked so will follow your progress as I can and how the implied different aspects come together.
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