Aye yo why Lincoln such a baddie?! She’s already entering the echelon of GOATed Red Flags 
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I’m so glad I gave this shot! You were able to make the MC the most interesting character (altho I loved Stevie and Elliot) which is hard to do imo.
I cant wait to read more; you have something very special here.
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Ok granted MC might have even more red flags…
Uhhh NVM so happy you’re enjoying Lin <333
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Wow thank you very very much 
I’m also glad you gave this a shot
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Ive been instantly hooked, bookmarked!
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What kind of red flags?
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Come on don’t make me spell out stuff that’s gonna happen naturally in the story 
<3
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There, there, its perfectly acceptable to leave the readers hanging to suffer from the unknown by not telling them a darn thing. In fact I adore doing that 
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unfortunately I am one of those readers who like spoilers, and the total unknown is rather discouraging.
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I’m sorry but everyone’s gonna have to wait
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I hate giving (certain plot-relevant) spoilers (at least) too, you’re not alone. 
Good luck!
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That’s good to know actually 
thank
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ONLY COCONUT WATER？！ NO WAY THAT IS NOT ENOUGH！
(Take my dumpling, white-cut chicken, and rice)(Open my fridge and take milk tea away)(go to the supermarket and buy a dozen of coconut water)(put all of them in the handmade basket)
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well I wasn’t planning on being so demanding but those are all things that I would like to eat… also impressive that you’re already done with the basket… mkay I’ll take it
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Hello,
Loved the demo and looking forward to more especially all the red flags.
Any chance youll let us choose body types and type of attractiveness like hansome or beautiful or whatever? And most importantly can we get some cross dressing action for male mcs?
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Heyo <3
Ok so beauty types are basically contained in the “unearthly or approachable” part. Sry but those are kind of the only two things that fit with the story, also I like them cause they got the most contrast. Body types is… well I’m trying to make up my mind on including them bc I’m not sure they’re ever gonna come up. In SHC, I included them, and only now in chapter 6 is there a single comment from one of the ROs that hints at the MC’s body type, and not even all MCs are gonna see it. So I’m thinking it might be a bit of a useless variable.
Crossdressing tho, that’s where it’s at. I always make all clothing options available for MCs of any gender buuuut that choice might actually be commented on by like press and stuff. I’d like that…
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Hurray for crossing dressing! Hope you create some cute outfits for us to play with cant wait to play with Lincoln and a cross dressing mc 
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So far, this is pretty damn fun and your writing is very good! I will definitely be playing again whenever there’s an update 
I don’t have any complaints at all, as you’re great at setting scenes and creating interesting character personalities!
It’s going to sound pretty strange since I’m not one of those people who view a main character as a self-insert or anything of the sort (I view them more as video game characters even in IF than anything else) but it would be nice to be able to decide what genre of music you want your band to play-- even though I’m pretty sure something like that would probably be difficult to code. Haha, seriously, it’s not even a suggestion, it’s just a random thought off the top of my head and not at all serious.
Like I said though, this is another one that I’ll be looking forward to keep reading as you work on it =)
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AHHH. I love this so much! I’m so stoked to see where this project goes! Thank you for sharing it with us!
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great job friend I hope to buy it when it is complete in a couple of years
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