PRESS PLAY (music WIP, prologue, chapter 1 + chapter 2, 118k words; UPDATED September 30th)

@girlfromthecrypt All these little details have me wanting to see more faster, but it got me to thinking more. In the synopsis and alluded to in demo currently there is hospitalization in the MCs past. Im assuming thats around the same time of zima’s issues so interested to see how it all played out. Yet it got me to thinking is that something thats teased throughout the bands interviews? An when it rolls back around to MC thats when we get the big flashback?

Lol to the 1st person perspective compared to second or third its all about the execution of them for me if im going to enjoy it. An you have done a fantastic job with your approach. :smiley:

Infact if i ever get my game a going im likely to drive some people up the wall :: snickers :: grammer and the like isnt exactly my strong suit.

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This is great. So cozy. I’m invested in the MC already. You write too good games!

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I LOVE THIS!!! Seriously this is amazing! Liked, bookmarked, can’t wait for more!

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I can say that I’ve been reading these stories for years and never commented on anything, but this story made me rethink anonymity, I love stories like these, which are different from the conventional, so far I found it so creative, the podcast format is different, that’s why I loved it, the writing is impeccable, congratulations and please try to update it whenever possible, because this is actually really good and left me wanting more.

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Oohhh this is soo juicyy :eyes::eyes: Super excited for more :heavy_heart_exclamation:

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Okay I don’t expect this as flashback into the past with interview and everything, the story is brilliantly put together, I like MC can have dead face.

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:drooling_face: :drooling_face:OMG, I love this story!!! I will do everything if you finish it(just joking but I really love it, that is true)!!!

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put my ass here.pls trick me when heres something new

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Oh i love these type of stories that start at the finishing line and then show us the road to that. Cant wait to have my mc become a pop culture god only to piledrive them out of their success story.

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I just finished and was like, wow that was really well put and a super fun read. Then I find out you’re also working on Such Happy Campers?? I’m officially a fan of your work! Can’t wait for both!

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I played infamous as well and yeah Seven was on something else in that. I’m waiting for the full version of that as well.

But yeah this really feels like you create your own character and you don’t have to respond a sorta way to please everyone.

That part where I’m at the party in a room writing and listening to a song and Stevie walks in really had me picturing it and that bond I really felt it.

Like this is the type of story, movie, series, game, etc I really love and connect with.

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Everzone be lining up to torture MC haha

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Yay! :blush: Omg I’m so happy to hear that <3

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want more need more cant wait for more like it

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I loved it so much! Your lyrics are just chef’s kiss
Can’t wait to see more :heart:

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I’m so happy you like it so much! I loved writing Stevie’s interview bc it felt so cozy haha :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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omg you actually like them?? I’m super insecure bout my songwriting skills ngl.

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I liked them too!

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Three bottles of coconut water in a handmade basket, now, or you’ll never get an update again :no_mouth: :gun:

Jk, thanks so much

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Wow I’m feeling super honored by this, thank you so much for taking the time to tell me. I hope you’ll continue to enjoy it going forward :sparkling_heart:

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