We just appreciate your writing so much we feel you don’t need the side-gig of being a comedian too 
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Thank you 
very much
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Finally, appreciation for my sparkling humor!!
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Awww 
Wait is that your way of telling me that wasn’t a good pun? 
I can do better I swear, I can make it in standup yet
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omg not only an amazing writer but talented comedian too? Renaissance (wo)man in her full glory indeed……
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Thriving. I am it’s definition
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follow girlfromthecrypt for more standup bangers, as they (me) would say on twitter
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Knowledge of seemingly useless puns increased 
I really didn’t notice this, looks like there’s still room for me to improve my English XD
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Sorry, I didn’t get your joke lol.
But seriously, genius. I really like your writing - now even more with ur refined jokes
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Just needed to say this was an absolute banger, can’t wait to lose all my friends and go down the Maddox path like any self respecting rock front person would
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lol i read it and thought it was cool. Definitely love your puns 
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Will the game eventually ends with the interview? Or there will be more in the future after the whole interview about their past? Cause it feels all too…settled if it ends with the interview. Don’t wanna leave Angel along…
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Lol i have this feeling we havent seen the half of it yet. 
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I love this its really well written and i love the way scenes are affected by our relationships with characters. Stevies reactions to us flirting with other characters if you decide to have her be attracted to the mc and little stuff like that really adds to the playthrough variety.
This genuinely could be a favorite IF of mine good luck with your WIP.
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I’m a huge fan of this demo!! I love the presentation, the pacing, and characters. The interview portions remind me a lot of SLAMMED! and I freakin’ loved that game. It’s also super customizable!
I always play blind, so finding out the truth about Paul(ette) was a MASSIVE plot twist for me! I can tell you love music. Your hard work is evident in the witty banter you write and just the way you capture the vibes of performing and practicing. I can also tell you understand the ugly reality of living with shitty parents. Stevie’s reassurances are always so sweet.
I am looking forward to flirting with Lincoln at his Halloween party and more awkward family hugs with my siblings!! 
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Hii, late response, I know. But thank you! I think this is one of, if not my favorite comment I’ve gotten so far because you saying that you can tell I love music means more to me than I thought and that just hit me like a gut punch, if a gut punch was a nice and pleasurable thing! And yes, I do know a lot of certain very ugly realities, and you pointing this out made me very happy as well (if a little wistful).
I’m gonna take this opportunity to say that during this week and the next, “production” is slowed because of irl work events that are very very important, so I won’t have time to write again properly until November. But fear not, I think after this is over, I’m gonna have another one of those overdrive weekends where I write like 10k in one sitting just to compensate for the absence lol.
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2 chapters in and i already think its one of the best on this site that ive read
Also the random guy who recommended me this and told me it was more lighthearted than infamous was either clueless or setting me up 
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Thank you very much!
Yeah idk what to make of that either. Lighthearted isn’t what I’d use to describe this haha
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?? Come onnn Please don’t talk smack about other WIPs here. Feels wrong. And I don’t think infamous is trashy
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that’s a really weird thing to say
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