Oh Mother, Where Art Thou? [Updated: 7/13/25](77k Words)

Small Update and Bughunt Now Done!

Hello everyone!

I have been on an absolute bughunt today fixing the IF and all the error codes, sorry that it took me so damn long. My new job has been killing me physically so when I get home and on my days off I just absolutely crash out (literally). It all leaves me with so little time to write but I did have a day off today and vowed I would get ish done so please let me know if you get any more error codes!

I also added about 5k words and rewrote some segments, so if a lot of dialogue (especially around the dinner scene is different) it is because my style of writing is tearing things down, cannibalizing it, rewriting it, editing it to hell and back; only to repeat the process until I am happy with it lol.

I have also decided that a high brazen stat and brazen oriented choices will lead to the MC cussing more because I found it funny, let me know if you all are on board with this change. I still have to change some dialogue for it but the first one that is already written for it is the learning attitude segment.

I changed some other things but I don’t remember them all so just have fun! :blue_heart:

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