This novel could have been much more,just give us a true history and drama to go along the football matches,since I was a young lad I have been drawn to different kinds of sport anime like Baby Steps,EyeShield101 and of course Inazuma Eleven if we speak about a soccer based one.
The World of football is a really corrupt one where image and sponsors matter above all else sport related,players are little more than resources for big teams that are watching out only for pure profit sometimes using unsavory means,fixed matches,billionaire club owners with little to no morality and football associations with no regard for real values,that’s what the top level of soccer is like.
But even as a starting professional there are many dramas and challenges you have to go through,if you start playing on a amateur team(that would have been the perfect start of the series,showing us the origins of our MC) struggling to reach the month’s end with non existent salaries doing a second work while still climbing up to the hope that football can still be the thing for you cause it is your dream,there are many opportunities where you could have showed Writer the evolution of a professional exposing and speaking about the realities behind this beautiful sport.
The player’s evolution and growth,the loyalty to a club that you come to regard as your own home putting that sense of familiarity before any kind of moment,the joy while playing,the tears of defeat and the anger while learning that a competition was not played on equal terms.You can explore tons of topics really,it is very interesting to focus on the struggle and all that it involves the sacrifice.
Starting at the very top,without any kind of plot or development for the characters involved was very shallowed,why would anyone play a story that is simply a match simulator where you do not really meet your rivals enough to develop a sense of competition(the dynamic what your so called big rival was repetitive and hardly worth mentioning,you face off against whole teams yet you barely know who the players are truly like not even getting their names),on sports people are the most important fact learn from sport Anime friends/rivals/teanmates even the trainers need to be developed to actually portray correctly the emotion that comes naturally to a game like football.
Like others have mentioned before including romance on the whole narrative was an interesting prospect,even the idea of the MC making up his mind and staying loyal to a girl or fall to temptation and start new relationships,having several love interests some related to the world of soccer and other just people the MC had the chance to meet on his everyday life,I believe this game should have been about that too slice of life interactions where we make our MC forge bonds beyond the football field mentioned before paying the rent but keeping in touch with family could be explored more deeply,events like meeting old friends going to a highschool reunion or something elements that make our MC truly feel alive as a person,showing us the many faces of the player beyond his skills on the field.
The life of a football players building up the protagonist from the slightest connotation,same with rivals/trainers etc showing us their backstories and personal challenges makes the whole setting feel more compelling.
Was honestly very disappointed when I played the thing weeks ago but really it gave me such as a distaste that was going to keep my opinion to myself cause it is a big mess and impossible to fix better to start a brand new project learning from the bad planning.