Mysteries of the Star Odyssey [COMPLETE]

Hi hi!
I’m Lainy, a game development student, and I’ve just wrapped up my very first interactive fiction story. It’s short and sweet since I had just a week to craft a solid story, code, and debug, but hey, it comes packed with 5 awesome achievements to uncover! How cool is that? I am open to all critiques and suggestions so I can grow and become better in my craft. You are more than welcome to tell me what you think here or on ~🎮

Mysteries of the Star Odyssey