You’re welcome 
You definitely succeeded with having multidimensional characters with their own arcs. As for the stuff I was saying I’d’ve liked to have seen, I don’t want you to think of that as a complaint so much as me sighing and going “if only.” You could write for decades and not include everything someone could ask for… even if you had the power to stop time, that wouldn’t entirely help because time would need to be running to operate the keyboard 
I’m not even sure how I’d go about mediating Kyle and Kate if they were real people, anyway. “Okay, Kyle, Kate has actual feelings. Kate, Kyle isn’t being venomous, he’s just an idiot. Discuss.”
…Yeah, somehow I don’t see either of them liking me after that.
I’ve started out Zombie Exodus. Pretty intrigued once I got to interacting with Emma and Heather, and in particular upon arrival at the Cathedral itself. Is New version of Zombie Exodus the current correct place for feedback?
(The big question, of course, is what “A Zombie Exodus Use of Time” would look like. Being able to stop time would certainly come in handy in a zombie apocalypse!)