Nice seing
That drawing is going straight on the fridge! 
MC sometimes must feel like they have a golden retriever and the meanest cat ever on their side.
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V: I… kill people.
MC: …Yeah?
V: You knew?
MC: Darling, you aren’t very good at keeping secrets. Still love you tho.
Valerie then wakes up sweaty in the middle of the night, eyes wide and still disoriented from the dream.
Thank you for the comment! 
<3
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Neutral terms would probably work best for now, at least until those additional options and scenes get more flesh out. If you’re looking for more, ahem inspiration on that front, I recommend checking out some of the IF stuff that CC Hill has put out.
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Hello, punks!
I had to study for some tests from college, but now I’m free once again. Thank the gods.
Chapter 5 is around 30K words now, and I’ll be writing more this weekend.
I (try to) do more updates on tumblr now to not spam notifications here.
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Hey, not sure If I am being nosy.
But some pronouns and scripts fail. Like where it should “her” or “she”, it turns into gibberish like [$giverish]
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Oh, don’t worry about being nosy! I’m a dumb dumb who sometimes fat-fingers something when I’m writing the variables, so maybe that was it. Thank you so much for letting me know! Could you explain which scene it appeared in like that, or send me a screenshot? I’ll correct it in the next update.
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There were more, but I didn’t take all their shots
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From that screenshot looks like there’s extra space between $ and { – maybe doing a ctrl-f for $ { on the files would help catch them?
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Thank you a lot, I found other exemples of it and it will be fixed in the next update <3
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