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[spoiler]Comments:
Overall love the story and the characters. Especially love the tongue-in-cheek writing!
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In the beginning the story refers to the main character’s mother’s portrait being removed, etc. But later we find out that the mother is really the Faerie Queene and her relationship with the Duke was a tryst and the Duke had an ailing wife… Which would mean the portrait of the Duke’s wife shouldn’t have been the Faerie Queene anyway.
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I punched the fairy-lookalike and it worked. The game said that he was never to be seen from again, but then later I hear stories from the shepherds but the fairy-lookalike causing trouble. I think I would prefer a way to get rid of him entirely - he was a pretty annoying character from my first playthrough so I was glad when I thought he wouldn’t be able to cause trouble anymore after being punched… but apparently not.
Bug Reports (bug reporter failed):
““I need to rest for a moment,” he says”
refers to Maroon Knight as male when it is female.
“evil, fairy lookalike”; “you have an evil fairy twin roaming around the forest”; “the fairy grove”
Is there is difference in the use of faerie and fairy? I think the usage should not be inconsistent.[/spoiler]