Merry Crisis (WIP) - Updated: 7 Jan '25 [300k words]

Updated Character portraits

So, an amazingly talented friend of mine did some character portraits for the Merry Crisis characters, and I hope you’ll love them as much as I do!! Here’s a peek at them (full size images in the post) but do go check it out on Tumblr and show @dumplingcatho some love!!!

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@freya Thank you!!! Glad you enjoyed it, happy holidays to you too!

@AnonymousChild Oohhh omg happy you appreciated the fluency of Mandarin choice, I myself am not as good at Mandarin as I wish I were. As for the SAF band, oh interesting!! Good sleuthing! I didn’t realize you’d have to be PES C-E1 to be considered for the band, but I guess it makes sense not to ‘waste’ a good soldier otherwise -.-

oops ok to be fair dapao is how i’d say it in real life rather than the super mandarin “da bao” but I totally see what you’re saying.

@Jenna_V And I’m always so glad when people feel like the story spoke to them/they connected with the experience.

But yeah I’m definitely going to finish this story—as you pointed out, this particular story is very close to my heart and extremely personal.

This bit depends on what you choose though :wink:

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This is exactly how I imagined F!Shay to look and I’m feeling completely normal about this I swear :flushed:

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I am… not normal about those portraits either… :joy:

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Cute portraits! I don’t have any art talent I just use faceclaims:

Glenn Yong as Qiu, the schoolboy who was my mc’s first love and also first broke his heart.

And Ayden Sng as our hottie neighbour, Shay.

Now my mc and Nat do have faceclaims but they’re not real people but AI generated images I found that just clicked for me. Maybe I’ll post them when I am back home in the new year.

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Mein gott… I can’t believe the sweetness, heart ache, and worries I felt when I played the demo! Nat…Qiu…my heart!

WHY must you play with my feelings!?

Thank you for that XD

All in all, thanks for the hard work on this, I knew I felt something, and I love your other work!

Happy Holidays to you~

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I love Shay and Qiu at the same time…WHYYYYYYYYYYYY @burninglights

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Hi this is just a question I got for Merry Crisis (sorry if I sent the same ask on tumblr, I didn’t know which one to use). I was rereading the demo and I noticed the “entrepreneur” job option was gone. Is that on purpose or accident? Because my charisma main MC is kind of suffering lol :sweat:

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I think that one has been gone for awhile…
tho the ones that are still there are-

Grad student, on my way to becoming the ‘failed’ kind of doctor.
Midfielder playing for New York Football Club.
Lead singer for an indie rock band.

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Awww man. How do I get my charisma stat up then?

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I these options (screenshots cause its hard to explain lol):
and i think there was a few more options but I forgot…

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Aww…wanted to make one of those to romance Qiu, as the entrepreneur is somebody who could possibly live in Singapore without running afoul of the PAP in a way my indie artist mc simply cannot.

In any case I do have an actual suggestion, again, relating to the indie musician mc. And that is to change their US Visa from H1-B to O-1, as H1-B actually makes it impossible to be an artist of any sort and applies only to background jobs in the showbiz industry, such as talent management.
Here’s an article that explains that you do not have to be a world famous musician to be able to get an O-1 visa. Within the context of the game the mc could have used the one year grace period for recent graduates, not to mention using their spare time during their studies to play unpaid gigs to get enough of a foothold to possibly qualify for O-1 status. Some of the text for indie musician mc that they are starting to be able to headline at mid-sized nightclubs would seem enough to qualify as per the lawyer’s linked article.

Anyway just food for though, and imho better than having indie musician mc need to have a boring as shit job take up most of their time while not helping them with their actual career whatsoever.

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Those options only go up by a few points though compared to the automatic +10 the career options do. Do you know the reason the author removed it?

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In the prologue, I picked these options
“ I’d tried to squeeze in a meeting with some friends before I left, and really shouldn’t have.”
“ We bake Christmas cookies and invite the neighbors ghbours over, singing karaoke while we decorate.”
“ Well, I’m conventionally attractive.”

Based on the code unless I sacrifice my job success, I can’t get my stats up above a 15 before all those stat checks in the next chapter. And most of them are charisma >18 even if I do sacrifice my job success the highest I got up to was an 18 :sob:

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Looking at the soccer player option, I have to laugh at my poor MC situation. New York City actually does have a first division team, in major league soccer, yet the poor dude is still living in a crappy apartment and has to pay half the rent

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I don’t know why @burninglights removed it.
im sorry but the rest is out of my hands, and highest is 18…thought it was 20 lol…:laughing:

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Eh, something to note for the next update and/or the beta, then. With as much coding as goes in to any of these games, it’s not unheard of that the math on some stats and checks ends up not quite adding up right.

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@idonotlikeusernames Ahh cool faceclaims!! I especially like Glenn Yong! Definitely looking forward to seeing who your Nat is! P.S. whoa the detail on the musician thing is interesting, maybe I’ll see if I can add somewhere that MC might need to swap / apply for O-1 post-graduation, or just have MC be on the O-1 visa upfront.

@Edie_Dreyer Aww hehehehe, glad you liked the IF and gleefully rubbing my hands together re: you being torn between Nat and Qiu! @love4tae That goes for you too, with Shay and Qiu!

@oldgrandpa7272 ya know, with all the messages I’ve got asking for the start-up CEO to be added back… I’ll do it next update haha. I just thought the other 3 routes would get actual extra scenes with the main characters and I couldn’t think of any extra scenes possible for CEO, but if y’all are prepared for that then :person_shrugging: who am I to deny y’all the fun, ey? :slight_smile:

@Sujan_Dhakal HAHAHA well, to be fair, poor MC is not really a starter in the club at this moment, but on the cusp of a breakthrough! Here’s hoping they can impress the coaches enough this season to move into a better apartment (especially for those no longer dating Nat!) This actually will probably be part of the epilogue.

Addition: love the suggestion, @Sujan_Dhakal , the timeline does work out well!

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Just looking at contract negotiations because I’m more obsessed with this tiny detail than I really should be, you could clarify that the MC is playing for the reserve team, which would justify the monetary problems easily. And with winter being the off-season in North America, it leaves open an opportunity to get pulled up for the first team squad right when the epilogue should be
Actually, never mind that, forgot this game takes place in 2018 and that would’ve been before the reserve leak system was ever implemented, so just being a member on the first team who isn’t a starter works OK

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This game is really cute.

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Stripped of any possible future or expectations or obligations, all that’s left between you is the thing that had been there through it all: the initial spark of attraction that had drew you to him, and him to you.

The bolded word. Correct past participle would be: “…that had drawn you to him, and him to you.”

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