linus supremacy!!! if you ever kill him off, i will actually riot 
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Well, thanks for the heads up! 
Chapter 1 Update Announcement (November 4th, 2022)
Hi guys!
I’m extremely elated to finally be able to announce the completion of Chapter 1!!!
The update will be released this weekend! 
Thank you so much for reading!
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I’m looking forward to it
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Can’t wait.
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MAJOR UPDATE (November 6th, 2022)
Hi everyone! The entirety of chapter 1 is out now!!
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Added roughly 36k words of content! (word count stands at roughly 59.2k words now)
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Marked each romance option with a heart, so it’s easier to identify.
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Edited some parts of the prologue.
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In this update you’ll be able to explore the festival and get to know your companions more!
I would appreciate any feedback on grammatical errors, spelling errors, coding errors and awkwardly structured sentences.
I’d also love to hear your thoughts and theories, which you can pop in here or on my Tumblr! : )
Happy reading, I hope you enjoy!!! 
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Watch a ladybug land on your $hand} hand.
Max, Max, {name}…
Jump to their left."
Odd text.
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Thanks for pointing this out!!
I’ve gone ahead and fixed them now!
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Bless your hands 
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Thanks I wanted to know our friends better despite failing horribly at festival events lol
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Oh no, horribly? I tried not to make things too easy but I also didn’t intend for them to be terribly hard either lol I hope you still enjoyed it though!
Would you say it’s too difficult right now?
Also, thank you so much for reading!!
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Aye tis book nice as hell
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Maybe it’s my choices I made. I guess I will try again a few times.
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Thank you so much! That means a lot!! Is there anything you particularly liked? 
Okay, please do let me know if it’s too hard 'cause I’ll probably revamp it a bit then!
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The fight scene with great man Leon.
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Quick question: is Calix the dude in the hallway? Cause it isn’t that clear (where I am, anyway), but it seems like that might be what you’re going for
(I just reread it, now I’m not sure! Maybe I should actually continue reading…)
(Ok, I think I’m right! My comment still stands)
If they are the same, then I think there needs a a moment in the hallway that’s like “he seems familiar…” and then later when we realize he’s Calix there should be a “I knew he looked familiar! It had been so long…” or “how didn’t I recognize the prince!” kinda thing. If they aren’t the same… ignore what I said 
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Yeah I bad some choices so it’s not surprising I failed. It’s nothing to do with the hard the game is. Don’t worry about it
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This whole scene took me a long time to write, so I’m really glad you enjoyed it! 
Thanks for reading!
Yes, that’s what I was going for!
Sorry, do you mean I should add this when the mc is looking at the portrait? Also, did you get a name out of Calix back in the palace, or were you only introduced when gathered around the performance? (Just so I know where to change things up)
Thank you for the valuable feedback, I hope you enjoyed reading it!
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When we’re having our first conversation right next to the painting, we have no idea who he is. Then when we see him at the performance, we suddenly know his name and that he’s the prince.
(A possible solution might be when we see the royal family during the light show thing. We can recognize him from earlier and realize he’s the prince)
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This might be the old build since I haven’t played the update yet… but when I played, my MC did recognise him and just pretended not to. So I understood who he was, personally 
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