Aw thanks! 
I hope you enjoyed it!!
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Lol it would be very adorable indeed xD I’m looking forward to see more of the interaction with the animal, the prince (it seems he is very interested in MC), the childhood friends (sorry, I’m so bad with names 
) and the parents. By the way, is MC’s mother still there? Or did she die? Run away because she feared the red eyes?
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Well, I’ve got good news for you, 'cause I’ve currently got quite a bit of Atlas and Cora content for the remainder of chapter 1 planned!! (don’t worry about forgetting their names, it takes me a long time to remember names when I read IF too! 
)
MC’s mother isn’t around anymore… but that will definitely be explained in the story!
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I thought so and I hope it will explained soon 
even when I love MC’s father so much more lol xD he’s still there, right?
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I’m so happy you like mc’s dad!! Also, no need to worry Linus is alive and well …for now.
Just kidding 
I guess we’ll just have to wait and see 
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Please don’t do anything to the dad 
lol xD
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Hi, thank you so much for reading! I’ve gone ahead and fixed these mistakes, so they should be gone now!!
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Progress Announcement (October 21st, 2022)
Hi everyone!
I’ve decided to hop on here to report on the progress I’ve made so far!
Over the last few days I have managed to get quite a lot of writing and coding done, and I can excitedly say that roughly 75% of chapter 1 is now complete!! (adding around 10k+ words)
The next update is going to be a big one, seeing as it will probably wrap up Chapter 1!
All in all, thank you for reading, and more to come soon!
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That’s a very good thing that you always ask for your correction and try to learn from your mistakes. Its a habit of successful person.
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you are writing about justice that’s a very good thing wish you best of luck.
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Thanks! It’s easy for mistakes to slip past me when editing, so this makes things much easier
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I can’t wait to see it
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The end of chapter 1 is going to be pretty interesting, so I can’t wait to share and hear your thoughts!! 
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this is very good. really enjoyed the start. very vague but interesting. as for the flirt options, will they be labeled? some options seems to imply that the mc is shy and awkward and would describe them blushing. i assume these choices are relating more on the personality.
repeats
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Hi, thanks for giving this story a go! 
Yes, that’s correct and I will make sure to label them in the next update!!
It’s strange 'cause I’ve already corrected these mistakes and uploaded them to dashingdon, so I’m not sure why they still appear 
Whenever I click on the link these errors no longer show up, so maybe try refreshing your page?
Thanks for reading, and please let me know if you encounter any more problems!
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yup just did a quick restart and it seems like its all fixed. i mustve been playing while you were editing them
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this looks interesting, excited for the next update!!
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Hi, I’m glad you enjoyed the game 
Thanks for reading!
Progress announcement (26/10/2022)
Hi everyone!
Just wanted to quickly stop by and share some great news: the second half of chapter 1 currently stands at 20k+ now, and it’s slowly coming to an end 
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