May 2023's Writer's Support Thread

As @milaswriting says: there are many reasons that engagement fluxes so much.

The key here is to figure what you can do to hopefully, increase participation.

Polls, new posts with questions you want feedback on, perhaps starting a small discussion of the different romance options might all help.

There is no one answer, and even the most loyal readers go quiet once in a while.

Remember, you are not alone in your feelings and fears. Keep that in mind, and I am sure you will figure out ways to encourage feedback.

Believe in yourself as a writer. Again as milas writes above (see what I did there?), you’ll know when you need to change your writing.

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I recommend having a road map wet up with milestones. At the very least, set up milestones. These small goals can often grant a feeling of accomplishment needed to get you to the end.

I had about a 6+ month dry spell of solid interaction even after giving updates on a monthly basis to the demo. Don’t let this slow you down.

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Happy May everyone!

After some… let’s say ā€˜diversions’ in what I was able to get done last month, I’m trying something new when it comes to planning this month. To keep myself from being quite so aimless when I want to work on my WIP but don’t have the energy to write, I’m setting myself a secondary worldbuilding goal. The kind of thing that needs to be done to help me figure out later chapters but isn’t explicitly writing-related. It’s a bit of an experiment, but let’s see how it goes!

So, bringing it over from last month, my writing goal for May is to finish storyboarding and start writing the prologue.

As for worldbuilding, magic is going to be a fairly important aspect of the story later on, so I want to turn the rough, chaotic ideas I have into a coherent magic system I can reference.

Good luck everyone! Hope it’s a super creative May for you all!

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Sometimes people just don’t comment because they have nothing to say, even though they did enjoy whatever it is they’re not commenting on (ā€œI like itā€ with nothing else gets old real fast). I know I’m in that camp. (Incidentally, I also like your game.)

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Seconding (thirding?) what others have said - I have found that it can be helpful to give a prompt or ask questions of players because often people (including me) won’t necessarily be sure what to say, especially if they generally like it. Some of the most helpful feedback I got while drafting Royal Affairs arose was when I happened to ask about what people thought about a character or a particular aspect of the game. It really benefited me and the game, and I think players enjoyed it too. It’s always nice to see how your feedback can improve a game, and/or better understand the author’s intentions.

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An old friend advise me an online magazine to publish my tales. It’s worth a try

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Thank you for your very sweet replies, @milaswriting @Eiwynn @LiliArch and @Dvalor53 :pleading_face:

Yes I am going to aim to be more active now this year! I have missed the support and motivation of these threads.

Thank you for the suggestion! I am indeed considering a poll, perhaps later this week, to give more time for readers to play. Excited and curious for the results xD

Ooh Dawn of Heroes! I will be putting your book on my to-read list too. I hope you will get more engagement for it too, given the dedication you have poured into it :blue_heart:

I’ll try to tie this together with the planned poll. Thank you fo the suggestion!

/Edit oh no I missed one as Im on mobile

Thank you Lili! :blue_heart: I’m glad you liked it

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I’m late to the game this time around, but oh well.

This study course I’m doing is just… really a lot less interesting and engaging than I’d hoped, but I’m sticking it out because there are no refunds. It does suck rather a lot of the energy out of me I’d otherwise use on writing, though, so I’m trying to keep my goals aligned with that knowledge.

May Aspirations:

  • 45k on Fields of Asphodel. It’d be a nice chunk of Chapter Nine.
  • Perhaps get Chapter Eleven of Diaspora finished and out for public consumption. Perhaps.

Good luck to everyone!

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Chapter three, full speed ahead. There’s always a bit of limbo stage in between chapters in which I don’t know where to start, even though I have the broad strokes of the story in my mind - which has been my excuse for being lazy and not even opening the doc for the past three days :sweat_smile:.

Have to get back to work eventually, though, so I guess it’s time to pull out that writing brain once again.

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Anyone else have a problem naming fictional locations? Legitimately, I don’t know what it is, but I’m awful with names.

Occasionally, I think of one and go, ā€œyeah, that fitsā€ on a character, but locations? Nope. Call me Jon Snow because I know nothing.

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I’ve a problem with naming in general. My brain refuses to work out a character’s personality until I nail down the names - which can take an absurdly long time…

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I usually just find a name generator and choose the one I like the most.

Alternatively, just name the place after their most prominent geographic feature/history event/religious significance. I find this helps, too. (Edit to give an example: there is a location where a comet once struck, and I named it Starfall.)

As for character names - I work in the opposite way (coming up with backstory first before giving them a name) so not sure how to help in that regard xD

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You can choose the roman way. Perhaps the early explorers kept asking the names of prominent structures and kept getting similar answers, so a lot of rivers are named just that - rivers.

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I often use placeholder names, especially for characters. In the early stages of my most recent project my wife and I would refer to major characters with names of characters from TTRPGs who shared slight similarities when we discussed it, so that we wouldn’t get confused saying Character A, Character B, etc.

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This.

ā€œCursedfriendā€ is my all-time favorite placeholder name.

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Oh believe me, I know how confusing it can get.

I have 1 project that involves a Shade. Thing is, shades are a species so constantly going ā€œThe Shadeā€ got really confusing.

Eventually called it Umbrael, recalling reading that name somewhere. Then said, ā€œscrew itā€ and shortened it to Umbra cuz it fit better.

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That… is also historically accurate. For example, there are "Large Swamp (or marsh?)"s aplenty in Finland.

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I wanted to ask a couple of writers around here - how many words do you tend to write in a day? What’s a good or bad day to you? I ask because sometimes I’ll sit to write for what feels like forever and in the end only manage to get down a couple hundred words. It feels a bit deflating, but who knows, maybe that’s a totally normal pace and I’m the one pushing myself too hard.

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That’s a tricky question because I think it’s different for everyone and there is no universal answer.

Normally (ideally?), I try to hit 2000 words a day (10k per week), but it doesn’t always work. I can have some good weeks, and then, they can be followed by a couple of really bad ones. For example, April was a very bad month for me, and I wrote only about 18k words, when I was expecting to write about 30-35k.

It often feels bad because you don’t reach the goal you set for yourself, but I think that’s more of a mindset problem than an actual work problem.

If you’re not consistent enough, it’s not great, but if you push too hard, it’s not good either. I think the trickiest part when it comes to writing is to find balance, and that is something I still need to work on.

Don’t let it overwhelm you, though. You can do it! :yellow_heart:

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I try to average 7k a week, so 1k a day. As @Dariel mentioned there are good and bad weeks. This was also not what I started with. Before it was more like 400-600 words a day. That changed after I pushed myself to do NaNoWriMo. Finishing that event helped me have an understanding of what I could personally do and how.

I still have days when I would get lucky to have two hundred words done or weeks that I have less than 3k total.

It is a matter of finding what works for you and making sure you keep a discipline to write often. If you wait for inspiration you wont finish. Keep your dedication and handling each step one foot at a time.

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