Lost in your eyes (WIP) [3 Ch, 240K words] [Vampires/Romance/Dark Fantasy, supernatural]

Update time!!

This week was pretty productive, so let’s get right into it!

Saint and Vampires, Chapter 10, 11 and 12 are now up on Patreon!

The short novel is now at 28K words!

Started working on Lost in your eyes, chapter 3 part 5 as well!

Might add the scenes where you can skip the recent chapter since it’s more filler and while it does have a purpose and builds suspense, it’s more like the scene where the MC has a flashback with an argument with Blaine and goes to play soccer with him.

That’s about it! I’ll release the last chapter after tomorrow and then fully focus on Lost in your eyes!! <3

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Update time!

HOW IS IT MONDAY ALREADY?! :sob:

This week was productive as hecc, not only did I finish three chapters and ended the story of how Nathan and Natasha met, I already started on the fifth part of the third chapter of the main book! I’m gonna spend tomorrow outlining the chapter because it has helped me tonnes in the short book. I also feel like I should take out a few things from the main book and turn them into short stories “Like the date with John/Elizabeth” and “Soccer with Blaine” because imo they’re filler chapters at best, and while they do have tidbits of important information (Esp the one with John/Elizabeth) I feel it’d be better if they can be skipped should you encounter them. (Like the soccer W/Blaine)

Tl;dr

4K words have been written in Chapter 3, part 5.

The short novel between Natasha and Nathan has been finished.

I might turn filler chapters into skippable scenes.

That’s pretty much it! see you guys next week!

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Monday! (This monday went fast AF as well XD)

I feel like the days are flowing like water with how busy they are. But with busy-ness comes productivity! So let’s get into what we accomplished this week.

8K were written in Chap: 3 part 5, putting it a whopping 12K

9K of which were rewritten (so it’ll be a second draft)

1K Words were written in chapter 4.

I’m also going to make a short story for FDS/Rift walkers which will be an AU since I feel very limited in what the story is right now (it is, after all, the first day for them)

The short story won’t be too large, I’d say at most 10K words with a few choices sprinkled in.

As you guys might have noticed, I wrote a lot hence why the days are passing by like water through River XD I’ll release the chapter for Patreon Tomorrow/After tomorrow.

Chapter 4.1 will be released on Friday hopefully, if I’m able to maintain this level of productivity.

See you all and I hope you enjoy!

Also: Sneak peak! (Should you choose that you Like John/Elizabeth and also romanced Marcus/Melissa)


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Update time-
So, I updated Chapter 3, part 5 on Patreon which will be the last of the third chapter before I move onto the fourth.

Unfortunately I uhh… did a mess up this week. I wrote close to 7K words and on Saturday, there was unfortunately a power surge that kinda just wiped out the whole chapter and left nothing but red dots.

Dw though, I didn’t sit around mopping on how my week’s worth of writing got wasted, and I sat down and wrote

Lo and behold! I went from 0 to 5.4K words in a day and a half!! That’s my biggest record so yayyyy XD

Unfortunately I won’t be able to post anything on this Tuesday or Wednesday, hopefully next week!

Sorry for not much update ya’ll, I promise that you’ll like the next chapter!!

Sneak peak for chapter 4 ^-^

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Update!

  1. About 6K words were written.
  2. Chapter 4 is close to 11K words
  3. Will release it tomorrow on Patreon, and then make it public like, on 15th I think.

I kinda don’t know but I haven’t feeling well on Lost in your eyes, like a bit lost for some reason. All ideas that I get, get taken up by FDS, so depending on how things go, I might just make that a focus instead, sorry you guys >.<

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Came for the femboy still came for the femboy

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Hahaha, good thing you came for the femboy and not on the- [gets dragged away to comfy white room]


Update time!

So I wrote close to 7.5K words this week!

I already started my work on the AU which is sitting at 3.5K, will be releasing first chapter on Patreon tomorrow, then 2nd and third will follow the next week etc. There’s no clear end goal for it but it’ll be short. I’d say at most it’ll be close to 20K words but with meaningful choices.

Chapter 4.2 Is now at 2.5K words as well, and the plot’s steadily going forward!

A few errors with the main game has been resolved, the biggest being that you get locked out if you don’t have Hex for the ammunition of the gun after you purchase the gun.

That’s pretty much it! I’ll release the short novel on Nathan and Natasha’s story tomorrow! (I uhhh, had to do it on 27th but I forgor… again :pensive: I’m sorry ya’ll.)

Hope you have a great day and drink some water!! <3

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“Saints and Vampires” is now Public! Hope you guys the short novel!! <3

Synopsis: A battle sister, bound by a life of strict rules and unwavering duty, begins to question the very foundation of her beliefs when those she is sworn to kill show her what it means to be truly free.

Tags: Blood drinking, death, Forbidden love, Self discovery, Dark fantasy and obviously, Super naturals!

Word count: 36.5K

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Okay! Update time!!

Almost 4K words were written in chapter 4.2

The plot thickens with… Nvm I won’t spoiler ya’ll can read the book XD

Total words written this week: 9k words! Half of which was written in the AU for FDS!

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Update time!

Chapter 4.2 is finally finished and it sits at around 9K words which means about 3K words were written. It just needs a little polishing. I think I’ll release it on Patreon next week.

Chapter 4.1 will be released for Public on Friday so stay tuned! <3

That’s pretty much it, see ya’ll next week!! <3

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I know I said I’ll see ya’ll next week, but I’m here :sweat_smile:

Chapter 3.4 and 3.5 is now up! (I forgor that 4.1 was actually 3.5 my bad :sweat_smile:)
What to expect:

  • Introducing a new character! (A possible Antagonist)

  • Introducing a new side of Vale/Vivian.

  • More questions about who Marcus/Melissa is.

  • A few bug fixes

  • Some loving time with Marcus/Melissa (If you’ve romanced them)

  • A sense of direction for the MC now that they’ve met up with John/Elizabeth.
    Known bugs:

  • Changes in pronouns (I’m working on it I swear :sob:

Hope you guys enjoy!!

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Hi, I was rereading this and I can’t get passed this part I think it’s a bug or something?

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That is indeed a bug
Stupid bug
Sorry about that! Should be fixed now <3

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It’s fixed thank you!! :slight_smile:

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