Lost in your eyes (WIP) [3 Ch, 240K words] [Vampires/Romance/Dark Fantasy, supernatural]


Got this

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Hmm, dunno what the issue is, I think I failed to update the stats file- Sorry! Just checked and it should no longer be an issue <3

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Alright! Update time!

I might’ve been busy with assignments so not much to tell >.<

Almost finished with the short novel!_

Chapter 9 was posted! Which is about 2K words… I think.

Chapter 10 will be posted tomorrow, with chapter 11 following soon after!

I scrubbed like 2K words from chapter 10 (700 first, then 600 again. Didn’t like how it was going so I scrubbed it again and I still have the urge to scrub it cause ughhh, at least I like this version more.)

I’m gonna start reading through chapter 3.2 so I can get a feel of what I was writing and then start reading after tomorrow! See you guys next week ^-^

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the game doesn’t let me choose the gender of romantic options, except for my childhood friend, the rest for some reason became men without the right to choose, although I wanted to choose women

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So, just wondering because I got kind of confused with in some parts…but why is the story vastly different when you decide to skip to chapter 2 or play at the very beginning? It’s like seeing 2 completely different storylines, and a lot of features/things seem to be missing if you start from the 1st chapter prologue rather than skip to chapter 2.

Stuff like not being able to access the shop to buy stuff with the hex currency, not being able to choose what gender the ROs are, not being able to interact with Kate and Sagittarius, not getting into the fight with the werewolf, not being able to choose your body type and height, not being able to romance Melissa/Blaine etc… and even character details like Blaine being 5’5 feet tall even though his description is supposed to be 5’1. And a whole lotta more stuff.

Choosing to skip to chapter 2 allows me to access a lot of things that I couldn’t see or even select when I choose to start at the very beginning (chapter 1). So, are we supposed to play the prologue or actually skip to chapter 2 to access the “true” game and not the uh…kind of missing and unfinished path? Because I’m just confused at this point.

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Why does it keep restarting and I have to remake a character from scratch

Oh, someone’s playing-

I’m trying to fix a problem in the serve that doesn’t seem to show up ahaha-

Gimme juuuusssst a teensy second

It was a coding error, sorry! I forgor to put the “Test” variable as False so you were skipped forward to what I was testing, sorry >.<

Me rn

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No biggie it was just jarring having to restart the game automatically instead of going to the next chapter and not being to make certain choices that aren’t deemed important on the character creation that a later required in the latest chapter’s…

Oh an a lot of pronoun errors that keep interchanging between male(he/him) and female(she/her) mostly on Elizabeth’s character and Alice on the latest chapters and instead of referring to MC as ''him" they say “his” during the conversation between Elizabeth and Alice in the bar. when Elizabeth told Alice the she saw him in the church

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That’s weird. I’ll check it out in a bit! (Sorrrryyyyy this game was my first and it shows :weary: )

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I came back just to call it peak fiction

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This ain’t Femboy Dating simulator homie :pensive:

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Hii, I’m doing what you instructed : D
Clicked skip to chapter 2 part 3

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:eye: :lips: :eye:

Fixed! Thanks for pointing it out!! <3

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Hey uh, I click the demo link and it says “Couldn’t load scenes/chapter2.txt?cb=854718
The file is probably missing or empty.”

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it dosent work :frowning:

Fixed!! (Sorry about that, did an oopsie in my haste cause I had to prepare for multiple quizzes lol)

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It doesn’t want me to turn down Marcus.

Alas if just have my laptop with me I’ve already made a fan art of Marcus oh god
༼;´༎ຶ ۝ ༎ຶ༽ u know one of my weakness are femboys , and he’s one of the perfect characters I’ve encountered in all cog and wips I’ve tried ohhh ಥ╭╮ಥ now I feel bad

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I don’t want you to either :frowning: (Jk It’s fixed lol)

:flushed:

Boy do I have a game to show you

Oh wait nvm you’re already in Femboy Dating Sim :sweat_smile:

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