Also unsure if it’s intentional but I would have assumed the choice “you’re nervous” would raise stoic but it actually raises charming while the other raises stoic when it seems like a charming stat choice
Again not sure if intentional or not, just wanted to report it
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Yeah, those two choices are hard to grasp, even after I know what they respectively do. The best way to interpret the second choice is imagine someone having a teasing tone, one that’s borderline flirty when they say, “You’re nervous.
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Naturally, in plain text without a tone indicator (e.g. ‘you say teasingly’), that’s asking a lot of the reader’s reading comprehension, and instincts, which usually works against non-native speakers. 
When our intrepid author is done settling in to their new home, suggestions about polishing some of the more opaque choices could probably be put on their list of things to look at while moving forward in the story.
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Could you edit the code so that the colour’s first letter changes based on whether it is the first word in the sentence or not? Because having a capitalised first letter in the middle of the sentence bugs me. I feel compelled to reset the save game when I forget to make it lower case.
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I can neither confirm nor deny your theories as an answer will appear in one of the future chapters.
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I should phrase that better, so I’ll amend it as necessary.
I leave that to the readers, like you to find as the story progresses since it serves a narrative purpose.
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Hiya folks,
I just realized I didn’t announce that Exordium received an update over the weekend. Later than expected, unfortunately since I decided to change a few things last minute which is why chapter 8 is not available because I decided to include an investigation scene and its just… something.
Also, if anyone can give me advice on how to solve that blasted loop in chapter six, please do let me know.
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Hi, not sure if this is the bug you are talking about, but I encountered this error while going through the new update
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This happens after you get the burger from naomi
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Not exactly. But it is an error I’ll need to correct.
The exact issue, this being the loop occurs when you have to select one of the teams (villain or hero). Now what happens is you end up playing out both choices instead of the one. And it immediately jumps to chapter 7.
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The game ends where naomi calls you even if you pick either villain team or hero team
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Thanks.
I’ll be resolving the mentioned errors and see if I can remedy this one too.
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Dont know if this one was mentioned or not.
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I feel bad for piling this on you but I have another error code for you, I’m assuming it’s an code conflict for those who are playing a Revenge PC and are friends with Luca? (just my assumption, you probably no more than I do)
Edit:also when trying to revert to an older save you get this
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No need to apologize. I have to make sure that the project is readable/playable, so any issues that get pointed out I’ll resolve them. Also, I appreciate it.
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so far I’m really liking the game but my biggest issue is really not an issue for some people but I know it would be a big deal for some people out there and that is how much of this is taken almost word for word from MHA which as I said not the biggest issue in the world but people can be pretty rude about things like this but other than that it’s very very interesting and I’m hooked
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