yaaay lezzgooooo!! looking forward to it 
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Oh, i like how the customization now flows like water and finally we can see how we look, that is such a great upgrade haha, tho i noticed some flaws that do happen and come up, so i’mma list them up again, so that it is more manageable to see properly.
1: The gender we pick, isn’t showing
2: Not all cosmetics show, i picked multiple things and the only thing that shows, is a tattoo which i guess should be in the tattoo sector, right 
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3: The stats(moral, etc.) don’t seem to work properly yet, cause some do gain stat raises, those are only the moral, friendly and romantic stats, as far as i saw.
Just finished! Excited to see what you come out with in the future. Not much to give pointers on now, but I would say you could clean up the character traits selection portion. Right now you can select the same trait each three times (if you want to make it this way, perhaps change the dialogue to something like “no, my friends would double/triple down on their statement”), so consider removing that trait if someone chose it already.
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All thanks to you!! lol ty for giving me the feedback in the first place and for the continuing help! I’ll get on that stuff as soon as I can 
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Oh great point! I’m not quite sure how to work on that one cause I want people to be able to build up just one stat if they want. But i can also see how that would be redundant. I’ll try to work the code and see what I can do. Ty for the feedback!! 
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This is a really interesting concept and I’m excited to read more of it. One bug that I noticed was after selecting the first customisation option, it didn’t take me back to the menu but took me to the next set of options, just without the question. So I could see bald, ponytail etc but not any question about hair type which was a bit confusing, especially with the fashion one.
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Ty for the feedback! I’ll make sure to add a prompt so the player knows what they’re selecting. Ty again! 
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Hi! Im sorry! This is a known issue for Firefox users.
im going to working do some research on trying to fix it tonight. Again im sorry!
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Update #3
Hi friends! I’ve begun writing for chapter three. (woohoo!) Finishing will take some time but I didn’t want to leave you guys with nothing. Here are some character profiles for the other contestants. I also will post a poll this coming week to get your opinion on something so stay tuned!
Adelle Graham, 28 (f)- Marine Biologist from New South Wales. You can find me: Swimming with the fishes 
Let’s get lost together 
Description: 5’2 woman with peach colored skin, shoulder-length golden blonde hair, and a muscular build. Has big cheeks and eyes as blue as the ocean. Sports a thick Aussie accent.
Adelle has an independent, get-it-done personality. She tends to be impulsive and headstrong. It isn’t easy for her to be vulnerable.
Austin Gage, 24 (m)- Contractor. Countryboy. 
Virginia Proud. Loves: a woman who knows what she wants. At the end of the day, if you need a cold beer, easy conversation, and warm set of arms, I’m your man. HMU.
Description: A tall, 6’3 male with a young, open face, and tanned skin. Has blonde hair, deep dimples, and a strong jaw. Is very muscular and fit.
The youngest contestant, Austin has an easygoing personality. He is somewhat naive and very trusting. He loves to tell a good story and will go wherever the wind takes him.
Brigette Durand, 29 (f)- Bio: You know who I am. And if you say you don’t you’re a liar.
Description: A tall, 5’9 woman with pale, ivory skin. Has recently dyed jet black hair, sharp black eyes, and prominent cheekbones. Is very thin and lanky.
Brigette usually sports a scowl that reflects her boredom and dissatisfaction. Always ready with a biting quip or witty remark, she doesn’t mind saying the first thing on her mind. She is rarely seen without her vape.
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this is more curiosity than anything - but why the four options in particular? what made you pick them as ros over other contestants *_* ive also noticed they arent gender selectable. is it due to personal preference or other reasons (such as characterization or simply easier coding)?
Awesome questions! For the four ROs, I thought they would be the most interesting in terms of story and character development. They each have their own unique histories and personalities that the player will be able to explore. (They also have their own secrets and flaws) As for the genders, I knew writing 4 different paths would already be pretty complicated for my first try. I didn’t want to make it harder for myself and have it inevitably lead to burnout.
In the future, I might add more options and paths to the finished product depending on what you guys think of certain characters
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Thank you for bringing that to my attention! I tried it on Chrome with no issue yet, but im going to comb the code rn to see what that could be. Thank you!
I’m definitely naming my character Rian for Aoife path😭
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OMG pls XD
More Character Profiles
Jesse Locke, 26 (m)-Birmingham->Burbank| IRL Streamer/Content Creator| 1.5 mil on Conform, 250k on Vibecast | I’ve got the car, the job and a killer bod. All I need is someone who can keep up
Description: 6’0 male with tanned skin, golden blonde hair, and bright blue eyes. Is muscular with a broad clean shaven jaw. Has a pearly white smile. Also has a british accent.
Known as one of the top IRL streamers, Jesse is a looksmaxxing, charismatic, gymbro who is fixated on fame and clout. He is charming, yet mischievous and immature.
Keith Chang, 27 (m) - from Hong Kong. I write sometimes. I’m like a microwave: Easy to turn on and warm inside. 
Day in my life: Make some excellent tea and pretend to know what I’m doing. Occasionally, write a bestseller and then drink some more tea.
Description: 5’7 male with tan skin, lean build and expressive brown eyes. Sports shoulder-length brown hair and thick eyebrows. Is clean shaven.
A best-selling satirical fiction author, Keith loves humor and is outspoken. Because of this, he sometimes rubs others the wrong way.
Leila Brandon, 25 (f) -Maple Grove, MN. Receptionist. I’m an explorer who loves to live life to the fullest. A hopeless romantic seeking someone kind, curious and genuine. 
Description: 5’4 woman with alabaster skin, kind blue eyes, pale blonde hair, and freckles. Is lithe and slender. Has a rose tattoo on her forearm.
Leila is kind and soft-spoken. Others find her very attractive and are drawn to her easy-going nature. She also seems to be fragile both emotionally and physically.
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Update #4
Hey friends! I just updated the demo again lol (apologies in advance) It includes the beginning of chapter two and leaves off on more a satifying note. Next is going to be meeting the other contestants, which im super excited for. Tomorrow i’ll post the final character intros. Let me know what ya’ll think of the update
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