Knights of Evallon (WIP) [Updated 27 Jan 2024, 59k words]

I’m also putting these two here cause I wanted people opinion on which art for Armored Yuna looks better.

Summary

Kinda wondering if I should’ve turned this one into a Poll.

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Nice, I like 'em. Especially Yuna and Amelia.

As forwhich pic of Yuna is better, I think the red on the top’s armor fits better.

btw @Astralise.Ink, since the story began when the mc is a kid now, does that mean we won’t be having the flashbacks from the previous versions? The ones with Yuna and the like. I mentioned them before, but I couldn’t recall when in the timeline they took place.

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@Zarkrai Flavius’/Flavia’s skin tone is umber.

@comradelenin There will be some dream scenes like the one in chapter one.

Also, the Dreams scenes are not just for throwaway. They are part of the fundamental system.

Minor Spoilers below

The Tri-Realm Schema

The Three Realms

  • Physical Realm: This is the observable, tangible world where life unfolds in a concrete form. It’s governed by natural laws and is the realm of material and physical existence.

  • Dream Realm: This realm is the confluence of the subconscious thoughts, dreams, and nightmares of all sentient beings. It is a fluid, dynamic landscape shaped by desires, fears, and imaginations. The Dream Realm is both enchanting and daunting, filled with symbolic and surreal manifestations.

  • Ethereal Realm: The Ethereal Realm is the source of the universe’s fundamental energies and the seat of destiny. It is timeless and spaceless, encompassing the core essence and fate of all entities and phenomena.

Arcanum and its Flow

  • Arcanum: Arcanum is the universal life force or magical energy emanating from the Ethereal Realm. It’s the cornerstone of all magical and supernatural manifestations in the universe.

  • Flow of Arcanum: Arcanum permeates all realms. It is molded by the subconscious in the Dream Realm and finds physical expression in the Physical Realm.

Consciousness and Destiny

  • Consciousness: This concept pertains to the awareness and perception of beings, influencing their ability to interact with and shape the Dream Realm. It is a key factor in harnessing and interpreting the realm’s abstract nature.

  • Destiny: Analogous to Identity, Destiny represents the inherent nature or predetermined course of beings or objects in the Ethereal Realm. It subtly influences the trajectory of the universe and its inhabitants.

Magic Systems Integration

  • Magic in this universe is a manifestation of Arcanum, influenced by the dynamics of the three realms.
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I did put Umber skin tone in the AI generator and they keep coming back to the tan skin stuff, so it’s umber. I even looked it up just in case what umber was and it says it’s basically the perfect tan skin tone. Since the AI generator keeps bringing out tan-like skin tone, it has to be umber. I guess it’s just really light umber maybe if it’s something that’s usually darker.

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Finished to end. I did enjoy it.

Now if family died because of murderhobos in prologue, I’d want to murderhobo those villians.

At same time, murderhobo’ing causes more issues than solves. I wonder if there will be more than just path of violence? I did go thru to that currents ending without being violent on this day of demo.

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Judging by what I know of Elbert from the previous versions, I doubt killing him would cause any trouble for anyone.

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Just murderhobo THOSE problems away lmao

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Honestly, given that these soldiers are currently marauding across the countryside under orders to kill as many people and destroy as much as possible, I honestly think the number of our problems shrinks with every enemy casualty. We all saw what that one soldier was saying about our sister. I think we have a good measure of the character of these particular soldiers. The world won’t miss them. Heck, Evallon itself would be better off without them. They had their chance to defy orders and do the right thing, they decided they were cool with what they were doing, so I’m cool with what I’m doing.

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@Zarkrai

This is Flavia/Flavius


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Nice. I would’ve make some AI portraits of them if I knew they wore glasses and that they use guns. So are those wavy hairstyles for both of them or is it wavy for female and curly for male?

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When I typed in “umber” for their skin tone with the AI generator that I used. I mostly got these type of images before I settled on the ones I used.

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This is the AI generator that I was using. https://dream.ai

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@Zarkrai This is what I have in mind when I say umber.


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Espresso

Well I can’t do nothing about the AI picking a different shade of brown. I guess their skin tone does look more close to Honey skin tone. But it still looks close to Umber somewhat. Maybe…

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What kind of glasses is the female one wearing?

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Personally I want to see how this plays out. What options I will get involving this bloody conflict even Before & After this There’s a lot of unpaid debts that need to be paid up by the enemy. How do I look at this environment? I look at the old conflict Before the Geneva There’s no rules in war so everything might go. It’s terrifying that way. It brings A lot of emotions I don’t like but really get interested in stories like this.

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Nope. They would be far from missed.

Glad they didnt say anything about me or mother. They did ignore her gf too.

My MC Simon Draken


A young man with a goal to destroy the Evallonian Government so that the atrocities committed upon his village never happened to anyone else ever again.
Also one question you don’t have to answer if it’s to spoilery:Is Condor one of the 12 fallen or maybe a descendants of one?

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@Zarkrai normal glasses

@Cartman All Shadowcrafters are descendants of the Fallen. But all descendants of the Fallen are not Shadowcrafters. Plus, every generation the power dilutes further.

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Question

Is any of the original nightborn still alive? Or did they have mortal lifespans?

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