I’m just gonna kill them, seeing them begging to die instead of that procedure is to messed up for me.
1 Like
Just a quick question.I noticed if i capture the knights my friends dies by libra hand.Is this gonna bite me later
she will die anyway even if you catch knight or not.
1 Like
I don’t know where you are getting the part about being able to romance them if they are brainwashed. Read again, I said they have to live.
8 Likes
Since this seems to have become an issue, here it is. Massive spoilers follow:
You can romance Taurus/Capricorn only if you save them, free them, and be kind to them. If you set them free from Spirit’s crazy schemes, they will return to the Knights. However, Lucian Terrin, Leone, et al will treat them with suspicion and derision. Especially because Lucian Terrin is aware of the brainwashing technology. Eventually, when the Knights ambush you, they will switch sides, thus opening up their romance route.
I really didn’t want to reveal these details, but it seemed necessary to allay the fears.
20 Likes
I haven’t reread this in a bit, but isn’t the person we’re replacing already basically a doppleganger of us? I remember it being mentioned they looked extremely similar to us. Probably no Face Off shit going on at all. Lol
no i meant my other friend basically the side characters
1 Like
They look similar to us not exact, still had to have a whole face change anyway
I still think it’d make more sense to do some more routine plastic surgery. Since there’s already a resemblance.
Compiled typo and grammar feedback. I was surprised to see the demo rewritten but the added scenes really enhance the game. I enjoyed playing an assassin/secret agent for a bit longer, it gives more insight into the setting (plus it’s fun). It could use a little more polish but that’s probably best left for beta.
Typos and grammar
I badly want to make fun of this one 
Thorn
I would swap this word or reword this, that’s too archaic and it sounds odd right next to the more modern “he’s hot”.
Both should be capitalized.
Wrong pronoun
Should probably be one sentence unless this was supposed to be “See ya”?
Unnecessary capitalization
not sure if it was supposed to be ‘eyes’ or if you decided to be poetic
missing ‘will’
off
missing ? and missing capitalization
gone sour
4 Likes
Thanks! I appreciate the effort you have put in. It’s been very helpful.
4 Likes
Really liking the story thus far! Though I would like to meet this tragic princess, hopefully soon…
1 Like
Love the game so far! Action is pretty great overall and the characters are just lovely to read about.
A few small notes on localization though:
- the steward(ess) calls you sir on the second page they appear on, even if you’re female. The variable describing their gender on the same screen doesn’t seem to work? Just doesn’t show up if you made them male
- even if you actually pulled, the cheating screen with Kari/en always tells you that you were rejected.
- Olga calls you “pretty” if you’re female, I assume because some kind of [handsome/pretty] variable was put there?
4 Likes
Glad you like it. We will meet her soon.
8 Likes
Thank you! Gonna fix them ASAP.
8 Likes
Hello!
Since I haven’t received messages on Discord from the ones who applied to be testers last time, I’m looking for testers once again. I’ve just uploaded an additional 12000 words to the Alpha, and I need folks who play non-male MCs and romance male ROs.
The usual rules like not spoiling stuff apply.
Thanks!
9 Likes
Well maybe it’s just me, maybe this goes for others, I don’t know-
But I volunteered to playtest, I joined your discord. Still willing to playtest for you, by the by.
It is however rather hard to playtest for you when I cannot even find the playtest link anywhere in your discord.
And where exactly are we supposed to be sharing our notes on your discord?
That would also be helpful to know.
You should ask him in discord.
he need beta testers for non-male mc(Don’t know about gay) and male romance route.
3 Likes
Hey! Sorry about that, but as @fancyparadise said, you have to tell me on Discord who you are for me to assign you the role. Not everyone who joins Discord is a tester.
7 Likes