@Valixon Can you elaborate? Because fighting Yuna after the vision is long after the scene with Flavia and the family.
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Lol guess that answers the question then. Because itās that fight and landing on the ground with yuna. Then immediately it loops into the section on the same page on helping the family with flavia or notā¦ If it helps I choosed to help the first time.
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@Valixon I still donāt get it. After landing thr next comman is a goto_scene to a totally different scene.
I believe the expression youāre looking for is āThorn in my sideā.
Missing quotes there.
Unneeded line break here. Also, that sentence should be āIāll never forgetā or something like that.
Howās the poly route gonna work btw? Just do all of the routes?
Itās kinda funny how my least favorite character in two WIPs are both named Leone.
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At work currently so canāt post long but short answer is I did not get a additional scene after landing. It straight up literal same page on my screen scrolling down looped back to the scene and choice to help Flavia with helping the family in the car and choice to help or not. 
Hope that helps.
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@comradelenin Thanks! Iāll fix those when I get home.
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@Valixon Thatās so weird. I have checked and rechecked but canāt find anything that would cause that particular loop.
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A Mage Reborn
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@comradelenin I havenāt played it yet. Waiting for the full release.
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Heās divisive because reasons. Personally, Iām one for vengeance, as Iāve shown here.
Can we steal Leone rapier after we kill him?
Should be an āandā before āstepā.
āI amā. āIāmā doesnāt really work here. Need quotes too.
āFoolā not full.
How does she have Lykon? Heās dead.
āYet heā
āI haveā. āIāveā only works for things like āI have done somethingā. Using it like this is more of a medieval English thing. Unless thatās what youāre going for.
I just imagine responding with ādonāt worry, sheāll be fineā then slashing him.
Not a question.
Inhuman, unless her speed is somehow unusually cruel.
Iād go for āyouāreā here. Sounds more natural. Also, missing quotes.
capital s
Mayhaps
question mark
Maybe I missunderstood the post and you were referring to a later update, but I donāt feel like I got either of the 4 paths you mentioned in the update post? Sorry if Iām just an illiterate dummy lol
Iām enjoying this WIP. Kinda remind me of Saint Seiya for some reasons lol
Also, making the cop blush is just hilarious 
And Yuna? damn, the dark phoenix anyone? Holy crapā¦
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I will start a new game to see if itās still there since you fixed some other issues pretty sure I remember all the choices that lead to it.
@comradelenin Thanks! I appreciate the free help. XD
Iāll fix them when I get home. However, some of them are correct. For instance, it works without an āandā after the comma, because the following phrase is not an independent clause. In fact, Iām reading Dune right now, and Frank Herbert does it all the time. Also, Mayhap is the correct spelling. I was under the impression I had already fixed the full proof. I must have forgotten to upload it. XD
@Qais Unfortunately, you cannot steal his rapier.
@Mercz94 You arenāt a dummy.The update ends in the beginning of the four paths. XD
@E_RedMark Haha! Thanks! Also, I know what you mean. The Knights of the Zodiac. XD
@Valixon Thanks! I appreciate it.
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@E_RedMark And yes, making F blush is my favorite pastime XD, and Y does have Dark Phoenix vibes.
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Finished a quick playthrough lol of the same choices I had done before to the best of my memory and it didnāt pop back up that weird looping error. So going to say the other things you fixed earlier solved it lol and definitely a good read and I continue to look forward to whatās to come.
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@Valixon Thanks for the help and glad you liked it.
Also, fixed the grammar, punctuation, continuity errors. Thanks for all the helpful bug reports. Special thanks to @comradelenin for pointing out the many errors.
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The save function doesnāt work for me.
It says āError: Bad Slot - Has smPlugin been included?ā
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