Knights of Evallon (WIP) [Updated 27 Jan 2024, 59k words]

[Sneeky]

@Astralise.Ink

Now the question is if she will make an interesting RO.

[stsword]

They were human traffickers who were apparently linked to genocidal war crimes against the MC’s motherland.

A bit more than “well you’re in the vicinity so while I’m here…”

Now in a run where the MC slaughters the ex-husband and his thugs, yeah it’s a bit rich to pretend like the MC has much qualms about voting someone off the proverbial island that is life.

For an MC like that it would probably be “BAM! BAM! BAM! So are you hungry, Yuna? What do you think, waffles or pancakes?”

[Astralise.Ink]

@Sneeky Lmao! Jerry has the hots for the Divine.
@stsword Haha! Yeah, good points.

[ilovecoins]

From romancing a princess to a Goddess, huh?

That’s escalate quickly lmao.

Bet, MC has to do some apotheosis for that to happen.

[Astralise.Ink]

@ilovecoins Haha! There are stranger individuals the MC could possibly romance eventually. XD

[comradelenin]

Better at fighting. Also yes, people who kill war criminals and human traffickers are better than said war criminals and human traffickers. One is justice, the other is crime. And even if we’re NOT better than them, then why not just kill them anyway? We’ve already killed people, in for a penny, in for a pound.

@stsword

They were human traffickers who were apparently linked to genocidal war crimes against the MC’s motherland.

A bit more than “well you’re in the vicinity so while I’m here…”

Now in a run where the MC slaughters the ex-husband and his thugs, yeah it’s a bit rich to pretend like the MC has much qualms about voting someone off the proverbial island that is life.

For an MC like that it would probably be “BAM! BAM! BAM! So are you hungry, Yuna? What do you think, waffles or pancakes?”

Yeah, but the wife traffics our people too. The narration says they haven’t done anything to US. That’s true of most of the people we’re assigned to kill.

But yeah lol, just imagine Yuna demands we kill them, and just stops mid-sentence because we’ve already killed them without her telling us to.

[Oreven]

@Astralise.Ink

There are things in the farthest reaches of the Cosmos, in the edge of time and space, that makes the the gods look like petulant children.

…Oh no.

[comradelenin]

We gonna romance Cthulhu or something?

[Astralise.Ink]

Cthulu is cute.

[comradelenin]

That’s actually Nyarlathotep, which makes this even better.

[Scorporal]

Great story! I feel like we are in the golden Age of great WIPs!

[Astralise.Ink]

@comradelenin

That’s actually Nyarlathotep, which makes this even better.

Speaking of which, did you catch the reference to Nyarlathotep?

[Astralise.Ink]

@Scorporal Thanks for reading!! I am honored you think KOE is part of that Golden Age. XD

[Sakura_Higanbana28]

Ahhhh the classic Filipino action movie if I’m not mistaken it’s Lito Lapid.

[comradelenin]

You know, I don’t think I did. Might need a hand on this one.

[Astralise.Ink]

It’s easy to spot. I’m sure you will find it.

[comradelenin]

Tbh I haven’t read the stories with him in it, I’m just familiar with his character. Still, I’ll look over it again and see.

[Astralise.Ink]

It’s just a single line spoken by someone. It’s probably counterproductive for me to say this, but don’t spend time in the hunt for a single line. Lol.

[Eke_Daniel]

This will be one of the best stories when released. Nice work👍.

[Liu_Kang]

Very cool game keep it up